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Hi, Dearest [이름]! ^.^

Happy Thursday! ^^

First of all, I would like to say THANK YOU for being so kind to me.

You are always happy when I am in good condition.

I am really thankful that I have a student who treats me like a sister. ^^

Hahaha! ^^,

Am I over thinking?

Hahaha! ^^.

By the way, I am happy that you didn\'t feel your boss annoyed you when he had a meeting with you.

I think you somehow enjoyed your time with him.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, I am so amazed that you can manage your possessions properly, especially your credit card.

You really know how to use it.

In my case, I am really afraid to have my own credit card.

I might not make use of it correctly.

Hahaha! ^^,

I think your boyfriend feels that he is a very lucky man to have a girlfriend like you who can manage money well.

Good job! ^^.

That\'s all for now! ^^

See you! ^^,

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good afternoon!
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I am happy to hear that you totally recovered from your backache.
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I think your way that you did yesterday was really effective.
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Well, I will also try that when I suffer from that kind of symptom that you felt.
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>> BETTER: Well, I will also try that when I suffer from that kind of symptom.

>> OR: Well, I will also try that when I suffer from symptom which you felt.

By the way, I\'d like to ask you something about some words that we used in our last class.
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What I am curious is about the difference between victim and casualty.
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I think the two words have the same meaning, and at the same time, they also have the different meaning.
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>> BETTER: I think the two words have the same and different meanings at the same time.

Please help me making it clear. ^^
>> Please help me make it clear. (C1 PATTERN: help someone [to] do something)

>> OR: Please help me to make it clear.

By the way, today, I met my boss who I really missed, and we had a meeting for two hours.
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The real situation that I experienced was not away from my expectation. Hahaha!
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However, after finishing our meeting, he didn\'t call me anymore, so I could have some free time alone.
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During my free time, I helped my boyfriend buying something that he really needs.
>> During my free time, I helped my boyfriend in buying something that he really needs. (C2 PATTERN: help someone in doing something)

>> OR: During my free time, I helped my boyfriend to buy some things that he really needs. (See C1.)

>> OR: During my free time, I helped my boyfriend buy some things that he really needs.

The reason why I helped him doing that is that I can get a 7% discount by using my credit card.
>> The reason why I helped him in doing that is that I can get a 7% discount by using my credit card. (C3 See C2.)

>> OR: The reason why I helped him on that thing is because I can get a 7% discount by using my credit card. (PATTERN: help [someone] on that + singular noun or those + plural noun)

By doing that, I could save U$10. ^^;;
>> By doing that, I could save US$10. (C4 U$10 should be US$10.)

I felt somehow that I made money. Hahaha!
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Anyway, that\'s all for now and see you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Here is my homework. ^^
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I have thought of a few situations that we can face on our way to work or school.
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First, because of the traffic jam, we can be late for work or school.
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I have also experienced the same situation, so I usually leave from my home earlier than usual, especially on Monday.
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>> OR: I have also experienced the same situation, so I usually leave from my home earlier than usual, especially on Mondays.

Second, a situation like someone steps on my feet in the subway is a daily event.
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I usually get on the crowded subway, so there are no places to put my feet.
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In that case, it is impossible for people inside the subway to look down, so whenever people get on or off the subway, the situation that stepping on others happens frequently.
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Almost all people can\'t avoid that kind of situation in a jam-packed bus our subway.
>> Almost all people can\'t avoid that kind of situation in a jam-packed bus or subway. (C5 OUR should be OR.)

Well, all we have to do is to just watch ourselves.

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>> OR: Well, all we have to do is just to watch ourselves carefully.

>> OR: Well, all we have to do is just to be vigilant always.