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Dear my Student [이름],

A heavenly good Thursday to us!

A heavenly blessed day to your uncle and his family!

I am sorry to hear about the bad news, but I am somehow happy for your uncle and his family.

I am happy for him, because he won\'t feel any physical pain anymore.

I am happy for his family, because they won\'t longer see him in pain.

It is undeniable that his death will give sorrow to his family and to the other people, but he will always be there in spirit.

By the way, thank you for informing me about this.

Remember, everything will be okay.

Everything will get better in time.

Anyway, I called you five times, but you didn\'t answer.

You might have been busy that time.

That\'s okay! ^^

That\'s all for now!

See you!

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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I somehow seem to be unable to sleep tonight, because I just heard a bad new.
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My uncle just passed away because of his pancreatic cancer, so I have to go to Busan tomorrow.
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>> OR: My uncle just passed away due to his sickness which is pancreatic cancer, so i have to go to Busan tomorrow to attend his wake.

He is only 59 years old, and it is not his time to pass away, so I am so sad.
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>> OR: He is only 59 years old, and it is not yet his time to leave this world, so I am so sad.

He has two sons, and they already became an adult.
>> He has two sons, and they already became adults. (C1 You typed TWO SONS, so your AN ADULT should be ADULTS.)

Well, I am so regretful that my uncle can\'t see his sons getting married and having a child.
>> C2 I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Well, I am so regretful that my uncle can\'t see his sons get married and have children.

>> OR: Well, I am so sorry that my uncle can\'t see his sons have their own families.

Even if there were no chances for me to meet him very often, but I can memorize him as a good guy in my mind.
>> C3 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Even, if there were no chances for me to meet him very often, I can remember him as a good guy to me.

By this writing, I just wanted to let you know about my whereabouts.
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If I am available to take your call, I will try to attend our class tomorrow.
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See you!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Don\'t be sad. ^^;;

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I am oaky.

>> I am okay. (C4 OAKY should be OKAY.)