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2015-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Long time no see! I am back to normal, and my tiredness totally disappeared. Here in Korea, it is raining now, and it is from a typhoon. I think this typhoon will be able to resolve a drought. By the way, do you have a summer vacation in Power English? In my case, I will have a long holiday next month, but I didn't fix the date. Maybe, I will take 9 days off including weekends, and I need to make a plan for my summer vacation. I will let you know if I fix the exact date. Well, today, I am so busy to deal with some tasks that I didn't finish due to my absence. I've got to work hard and see you very soon! ^^ [이름]

강사 첨삭

Dear my Student [이름],

 

Happy Monday! ^.^

 

It is really hard sudden things happen.

You don\'t know how to deal with them with ease.

But, all is well still! ^^

 

I am looking forward to your updates.

Even though I envy you, because you have summer vacation, I still feel excited for you.

I know that you can plan for it very well.

I will go to your plan in my dreams.

Hahaha! ^^

 

That\'s all for now! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

 

 

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> CORRECT!

Long time no see!
>> CORRECT!

I am back to normal, and my tiredness totally disappeared.
>
> CORRECT!

Here in Korea, it is raining now, and it is from a typhoon.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Here in Korea, it is raining now due to a typhoon.

I think this typhoon will be able to resolve a drought.
>> I think this typhoon will be able to resolve some drought problems.

>> OR: I think this typhoon will be able to resolve some problems cause by drought.

By the way, do you have a summer vacation in Power English?
>> CORRECT!

In my case, I will have a long holiday next month, but I didn\'t fix the date.
>> CORRECT!

Maybe, I will take 9 days off including weekends, and I need to make a plan for my summer vacation.
>> CORRECT!

I will let you know if I fix the exact date.
>> CORRECT!

Well, today, I am so busy to deal with some tasks that I didn\'t finish due to my absence.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: Well, today, I am so busy to deal with some tasks that I didn\'t finish due to my absences.

I\'ve got to work hard and see you very soon! ^^
>> CORRECT!

[이름]

>> CORRECT!

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