Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
Happy Monday! ^.^
It is really hard sudden things happen.
You don\'t know how to deal with them with ease.
But, all is well still! ^^
I am looking forward to your updates.
Even though I envy you, because you have summer vacation, I still feel excited for you.
I know that you can plan for it very well.
I will go to your plan in my dreams.
Hahaha! ^^
That\'s all for now! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Long time no see!
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I am back to normal, and my tiredness totally disappeared.
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Here in Korea, it is raining now, and it is from a typhoon.
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>> OR: Here in Korea, it is raining now due to a typhoon.
I think this typhoon will be able to resolve a drought.
>> I think this typhoon will be able to resolve some drought problems.
>> OR: I think this typhoon will be able to resolve some problems cause by drought.
By the way, do you have a summer vacation in Power English?
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In my case, I will have a long holiday next month, but I didn\'t fix the date.
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Maybe, I will take 9 days off including weekends, and I need to make a plan for my summer vacation.
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I will let you know if I fix the exact date.
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Well, today, I am so busy to deal with some tasks that I didn\'t finish due to my absence.
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>> OR: Well, today, I am so busy to deal with some tasks that I didn\'t finish due to my absences.
I\'ve got to work hard and see you very soon! ^^
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[이름]
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