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Dear my Student [이름],

A blissful Tuesday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to apologize not answer your question before.

I might have forgotten it.

I am really sorry.

Don\'t worry, because you are not really persistent.

You don\'t even bother me.

I am thankful that you asked the question again, because I was so worried about something last week, but I couldn\'t remember what that was.

Fortunately, you reminded me about it.

Thanks a lot! ^^

Well! ^^

About your question, I hope I can explain the difference between those two words.

Let\'s start! ^^,

Both words are synonymous to each other, but when we talk about a crime, \'victim\' is more appropriate to associate with it.

Let\'s review the meaning of these words.

\'Casualty\' is a person who is killed or injured in war or in an accident.

\'Victim\' is a person who has been attacked, injured or killed as the result of a crime, a disease, an accident, and so on.

Therefore, when it comes to crimes, we can\'t use \'casualty.\'

By the way, thank you for telling me more about your funeral culture there in Korea.

I absolutely understand everything now, but I am just saddened because of the stereotyping that exist in that part of your tradition.

It is so unfair to think about having sons than daughters because of this ceremony.

Here in the Philippines, other people can carry our deceased loved ones\' coffins.

Anyway, I hope also that it will be changed very soon.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you tomorrow! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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>> OR: Dear [Name],

Good morning!
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Do you feel better than yesterday?
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You looked so pale because of your fever.
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>> OR: You look like a ghost because of your fever. (Hahaha! Kidding!)

I hope your condition is totally okay.
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>> OR: I hope you are totally okay.

By the way, I finally have some time to check my daily compositions that I wrote last week.
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I always appreciate that you help me to correct my mistakes.
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>> OR: I always appreciate you for helping me correcting my mistakes.

However, I think you forgot to answer my question that I asked you last Wednesday. ^^;;
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I am still curious about what the difference between \'victim\' and \'casualty\' is. ^^
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>> BETTER: I am still curious about the difference between \'victim\' and \'casualty.\'

Am I so persistent? ^^;;
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Sorry for bothering you. ^^;;
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By the way, I will let you know more about our funeral culture.
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>> OR: By the way, I will further introduce to you our funeral culture.

Here in Korea, we usually hold a funereal for 3 days in a funeral hall, and it starts from the day when the deceased passed away.
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As soon as we get the funeral hall, we have to make a deep bow twice first towards the portrait of the deceased, and then we also have to make a deep bow once with the bereaved to express our condolences.
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Making a deep bow is caused by our Confucian culture.
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Of course, if someone has the Christian religion, that person doesn\'t need to make a deep bow.
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>> BETTER: Of course, if someone is a Christian, he or she doesn\'t need to make a deep bow.

In our funereal culture, we have a different role between the male and female.
>> In our funeral culture, males and females have different roles.

>> OR: In our funeral culture, we have different roles, and they depend on our sex if we are males or females.

The male family members have to receive visitors in front of the portrait of the deceased, on the other hand, the female family members have to offer some dishes to the visitors who finished condoling.
>> The male family members have to receive visitors in front of the portrait of the deceased. On the other hand, the females family members have to offer some dishes to the visitors who finished condoling. (ON THE OTHER HAND cannot be used after a COMMA, but it can be used after a SEMICOLON.)

>> OR: The male family members have to receive visitors in front of the portrait of the deceased; on the other hand, the females family members have to offer some dishes to the visitors who finished condoling.

We can totally say that male family members lead all funereal ceremony.
>> We can totally say that male family members lead all funeral ceremonies. (PATTERN: all + plural noun)

When conveying the coffin, we need six men to carry that.
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>> OR: When conveying the coffin, we need six men to carry it.

That\'s why many older people still have a strong tradition of preferring sons to daughters.
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Our parents are also worried about their passing, because they only have two daughters.
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I somehow don\'t understand their thought, and I am thinking that that kind of thought has to be changed very soon.
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That\'s all for now and see you this evening! ^^
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[이름]

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