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Dear my Student [이름],

Good evening! ^.^

Thank you for the greeting! ^^

By the way, I commend you for following me. Hahaha! ^^,

Congratulations! ^^.

You won the fight against the mosquitoes.

However, I think you didn\'t have a completely comfortable sleep last night.

I hope that due to the better weather that you have today, you can sleep peacefully and very well.

I don\'t think that you are being demanding.

You feel normally. ^^

Anyway, I am sorry to hear about your boss\'s news.

But, I think things will go well there in your country soon.

Just stay positive.

All we need now is positivism to attract good things, especially achievements or successes.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good afternoon!
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Just like what you advised in our last class, I put my mosquito net to have a tight sleep yesterday.
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>> OR: Just like what you advised in our last class, I put my mosquito net last night to have a tight sleep.

>> OR: Just like what you suggested in our last class, I put my mosquito net last night for me to have a tight sleep.

Finally, they dare not came around me. Hahaha!
>> Finally, they dared not to come around me. Hahaha! (C1 In your sentence, DARE should be in past tense not COME.)

>> OR: Finally, they dared not come around me. Hahaha!

>> OR: Finally, they didn\'t dare to come around me. Hahaha!

>> OR: Finally, they didn\'t dare come around me. Hahaha!

However, the uncomfortable thing was that I felt a little stuffy under the mosquito net. ^^;;
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I am being so demanding. ^^;;
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By the way, here in Korea, it is so windy, that I can\'t see ahead and walk.
>> C2 I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: By the way, here in Korea, it is so windy, that I can\'t see what\'s ahead of me and walk.

>> OR: By the way, here in Korea, it is so windy, that I can\'t see what\'s ahead of me and walk with my two eyes open normally.

I think the strong wind is coming from the eleventh typhoon named \'NANGKA.\'
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Because of this, the weather is not that hot, so I feel cool and will be able to fall into a deep sleep tonight.
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Anyway, today, I met my boss, and we talk a lot about our business.
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He brought a lot of bad news, so our office\'s atmosphere was like as pouring cold water.
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>> OR: He brought a lot of bad news, so the atmosphere in our office was like as pouring cold water.

>> OR: He poured cold water on our office by bringing a lot of bad news.

>> OR: He poured cold water on our office by informing me a lot of bad news.

I also had to send many emails to our Chinese coworkers to discuss those serious issues.
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The item that we are doing now really depends on our economic situation, but nowadays, here in Korea, many big problems happened, so it made our economy down.
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I don\'t think this situation will get better in the near future.
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In this case, we have to think over some good strategies to endure this difficulty.
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Making money is so hard. ^^;;
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Anyway, that\'s all for now and see you very soon!
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[이름]

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