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학생이 쓴 원문
Dear my Teacher Paula,
A marvelous Friday to us!
I had a tight sleep yesterday, so my condition is so good today.
These days, the weather doesn't seem like summer.
The weather in summer is usually hot and humid here, but recently, the humidity is moderate, and the temperature is not that high.
I hope this kind of the weather condition will last longer. ^^
By the way, I forgot to move the recording file of our yesterday's class to my mobile phone, so I could not review our class this morning.
Studying the recording is one of my important homework to improve my English skill.
I don't like putting off something that I have to do, but in this case, I can't help to review that tomorrow. ^^;;
Suddenly, I counted the period that we have been together in Power English.
Another two months will make a full year.
I have studied English hard in my own way, and my English note is getting full with many sentences and words that you taught me.
I regularly look through the note, but the words that I kept a list of a long time ago were not already in my brain. Hahaha!
Now, I have about 2500 sentences in vocabulary list, and I repeat those every day, but I seem to have a big rubber in my head. ^^;;
However, I am satisfied with my current level, and I am confident to improve more in the future if I study English like my current way.
I owe it all to you. ^^
Anyway, I wish you a good plan for this coming weekend and see you very soon! ^^
[이름]
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Fabulous [이름]! ^.^
Happy Friday! ^^,
It is really a marvelous Friday for us even though it is raining cats and dogs now in my city.
Hahaha! ^^
Suddenly, I just want to go out and play under the rain, but, of course, I am also afraid to do that, because I don\'t want to be sick after having some happy time dancing while the rains pours so heavily.
I am so tempted, but I should control myself, because I need to work also.
Hahaha! ^^,
However, the thought of being a child again because of the rain makes me smile. ^^.
Well, I feel so good that you are somehow satisfied with your day because of a good weather there.
Why don\'t you go out and have some fun later after our class.
I think that would be greater than great.
Hahaha! ^^
By the way, about our yesterday\'s class recording, is it still possible for you to save it on your phone?
I don\'t know how to help you with this.
All I know is that when you have problems with class recordings, you may ask our managers for help.
They will surely do something to help you.
Anyway, thank you for producing serious study.
What I mean is that you have goals when it comes to learning more about English, and you are so diligent to achive them.
Because of that, I am more determined to be better at teacher the English language.
You said that you owe me some things in relation to English study.
You should always remember that you should always owe all your achievements to yourself.
Without your dedication and willingness to study and learn with me, all things will be wasted.
Anyhow, have a happy reading time! ^^
Make use of your weekend effectively and efficiently! ^^,
Enjoy a wonderful weekend! ^^.
See you! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!
A marvelous Friday to us!>> CORRECT!
I had a tight sleep yesterday, so my condition is so good today. >> CORRECT!
These days, the weather doesn\'t seem like summer. >> CORRECT!
The weather in summer is usually hot and humid here, but recently, the humidity is moderate, and the temperature is not that high. >> CORRECT!
I hope this kind of the weather condition will last longer. ^^>> I hope this kind of weather condition will last longer. (C1 I had a deep research about PATTERNS FOR KIND, and I come to know that there is only KIND OF SOMETHING. There is no KIND OF THE SOMETHING.)
By the way, I forgot to move the recording file of our yesterday\'s class to my mobile phone, so I could not review our class this morning. >> CORRECT!
Studying the recording is one of my important homework to improve my English skill. >> CORRECT!
I don\'t like putting off something that I have to do, but in this case, I can\'t help to review that tomorrow. ^^;;>> CORRECT!
Suddenly, I counted the period that we have been together in Power English.>> CORRECT!
Another two months will make a full year. >> CORRECT!
I have studied English hard in my own way, and my English note is getting full with many sentences and words that you taught me. >> CORRECT!
I regularly look through the note, but the words that I kept a list of a long time ago were not already in my brain. Hahaha! >> CORRECT!
Now, I have about 2500 sentences in vocabulary list, and I repeat those every day, but I seem to have a big rubber in my head. ^^;; >> CORRECT!
However, I am satisfied with my current level, and I am confident to improve more in the future if I study English like my current way. >> CORRECT!
I owe it all to you. ^^ >> CORRECT!
Anyway, I wish you a good plan for this coming weekend and see you very soon! ^^>> CORRECT!
[이름]
>> CORRECT!
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