Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
A happy Tuesday also to you! ^.^
Thank you for the greeting! ^^
You made my gloomy day bright! ^^,
By the way, thank you for the congratulations! ^^ Hahaha! ^^,
Of course, I will have a higher salary. ^^.
My work is from six hours to nine hours.
I am so blessed and excited to be a good full time teacher and employee.
I will make sure that my superiors won\'t regret approving my favor.
I am really very happy.
God answered my prayers! ^^
Anyway, don\'t worry about my dream! ^^,
There\'s always time for me to have Masters.
For now, I will help first and study later. Hahaha! ^^.
Anyhow, I think you can also stay awake for many days just like me.
We are so young, so let\'s take advantage of it! Hahaha! ^^
Young human body can do anything, and it will stay healthy.
Well, you are right about my private student.
He is the same person I told you before.
He is Taiwanese.
He is good at sales talk, but I am better than him.
He can\'t win over me. Hahaha! ^^.
Oh~~~!!! ^^
I need to answer a very important question.
What is the meaning of celebrant?
A celebrant is a person who leads a church service or a person who is celebrating something, for example at a party.
Therefore, your understanding about this word in connection to our class is correct, and I am sorry to say that your dictionary gave you somehow a wrong meaning of it.
Thank you for the question! ^^
Frankly speaking, I checked all the dictionaries I have, and all of them gave the same meaning of celebrant.
Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^,
I hope I answered your question well! ^^.
See you very soon! ^.^
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: Don\'t forget to have fun while checking the corrections and suggestions below. ^^
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A happy Tuesday to you!
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First, Congratulations on your full time job in Power English!
>> First, congratulations on your full time job in Power English! (C1 The C in CONGRATULATION shouldn\'t be in capital letter.)
I hope you can get a raise in your salary. ^^;;
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However, I somehow feel regretful about your decision, because I know about your dream.
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Well, I believe that you always choose the best way in your situation. ^^
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>> OR: Well, I believe that you always choose the best for yourself.
By the way, I saw your reply with fun, and I though you are so strong.
>> By the way, I saw your reply with fun, and I thought you are so strong. (C2 THOUGH should be THOUGHT, right?)
You stayed up all night, but you didn\'t seem to feel tired.
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If I were in that situation, I would faint the next day and sleep all day.
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Take advantage of your youth and play to the fullest, but always protect yourself and play safely. ^^~
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By the way, regarding your student, is he the one who I know?
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>> OR: By the way, regarding your student, do I know him?
If it is right, he might have been Taiwanese.
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>> OR: If it is right, he is Taiwanese.
No matter how persistent he was on asking you to teach him, I am happy for hearing the good result finally.
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You did manage your time and the guy well. ^^
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Don\'t overdo yourself on teaching English too much for your health. ^^
>> Don\'t overdo teaching English for your health. (C3 Putting OVERDO and TOO MUCH seems redundant. What do you think?)
>> OR: Don\'t teach English too much for you to have a good health.
Anyway, I reviewed my recording of our last class, and there is a question about the meaning of a word, and that is \'celebrant.\'
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Does it refer to the baby girl who celebrated her 1st birthday?
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According to a sentence below, my guess might be correct.
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-> I also gave US$100 as a monetary gift for the birthday celebrant.
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However, the meaning of the word in my dictionary is that \'A celebrant is a person who takes part in a ceremony and sends congratulations to someone.\'
>> However, the meaning of the word in my dictionary is that, \'A celebrant is a person who takes part in a ceremony and sends congratulations to someone.\' (C4 You forgot to put a COMMA after THAT.)
>> OR: However, the meaning of the word in my dictionary is that \'a celebrant is a person who takes part in a ceremony and sends congratulations to someone.\'
I am a little confused about the meaning of that.
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Is it \'A person who sends congratulations\' or \'A person who receives congratulations\'?
>> Is it \'a person who sends congratulations\' or \'a person who receives congratulations\'? (C5 It is better to write \'a person\' than \'A person.\')
I am waiting for your kind explanation. ^^
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Thank you in advance for your help. ^^
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>> OR: Thank you in advance for your help!
See you very soon!
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[이름]
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