Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A wonderful Wednesday to both of us! ^.^

I am sad to know about your unendurable weather there.

Fortunately, just like what you wrote on your composition, the rain is coming this evening, and that is a good news.

Surely, you will feel fine. ^^

By the way, about my private student, I already told him that I had a boyfriend.

I even posted it on Facebook, but he still didn\'t stop saying that he likes me.

I was so annoyed that time.

I hope I can find a way to permanently remove him on my way and life.

Thank you for the concern, but I don\'t want you to think about him more.

It is my problem, so I should resolve it.

Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, thank you for making your composition! ^^

I enjoyed reading it! ^^,

I hope you will also enjoy checking my reply. ^^.

See you later! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: I agree with your concept about using the internet as a means of gaining more information and learning. I hope our governments can think of ways on how to maximize the use the internet to make students love studying. ^^

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A good day to you!
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Here in Korea, the weather is so suffocating.
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The weather forecast said that the seasonal rain front is coming towards here, and it will rain this evening.
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I hope this rain can remove the humidity that clouds are holding.
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Indeed, the heat without the moisture would be good rather than the sweltering weather.
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>> OR: Indeed, the heat without the moisture would be good rather than a sweltering weather.

By the way, I checked your reply with fun, and I\'d like to say thank you. ^^
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Regarding the bestial guy, I feel that there is something very fish about his action, so you really should keep yourself away from him.
>> Regarding the bestial guy, I feel that there is something very fishy about his action, so you really should keep yourself away from him. (C1 FISH should be FISHY. Remember that FISH is used as a noun and verb, but FISHY is used as an adjective.)

Well, it can be the best way for you to tell a lie that you have a boyfriend. Hahaha! ^^;;
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Maybe, you might have used this way.
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If so, wow, it is so annoying.
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Let\'s find a good way together! ^^
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That\'s all for now and see you very soon!
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P.S.: Here is my homework.
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In my opinion, the internet is very useful for us to study something.
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>> OR: In my opinion, the internet is a very useful device for us to study something.

I also use the internet to study English and Chinese.
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>> OR: In my case, I also use the internet to study English and Chinese.

I am now taking a SKYPE English class in Power English, and the internet connection condition is not that bad.
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>> OR: I am not taking a Skype English class in Power English, and the internet connection condition is not that bad.

Sometimes, I can\'t hear teacher\'s words clearly due to the bad internet connation, but it happens rarely.
>> Sometimes, I can\'t hear my teacher\'s words clearly due to the bad internet connection, but it happens rarely. (C2 It is better for you to add MY before TEACHER\'S. CONNATION exists, but I think it should be CONNECTION.)

Using the internet to study something has some benefits below.
>> Using the internet to study something has some benefits, and they are below. (C3 Your sentence is not complete.)

First, I can save my expense and time.
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>> OR: First I can same money and time.

I can take part in my class wherever I am, regardless of place and time.
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Second, I can review my class without any restriction.
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Apart from this kind of specific educational benefit, we can get a lot of new and novel information from the internet.
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>> OR: Apart from this kind of specific educational benefit, we cab get a lot of new and legit information from the internet.

Therefore, if we can use the internet well as an educational tool, we can get a good education and various information without going academies.

>> Therefore, if we can use the internet well as an educational tool, we can get a good education and various information without going to academies. (C4 There should be TO before ACADEMIES.)

>> OR: Therefore, if we can use the internet well as an educational tool, we can get good education and various information without going to academies.