Composition

Hi there, Gentle [이름],

Happy Thursday! ^^

Pen pal? ^^,

I think you are right.

I also feel like that.

It is really interesting.

In my case, I can\'t remember if I had a pen pal before.

It is good that you were one of the Koreans who made military personnel stayed stronger during their trainings.

That was a big thing.

Those letters that you made for them were like encouragement for them not to give the service up.

Sending letters to someone you don\'t really know in person is really a challenging and exciting thing.

Sadly to say, that kind of practice doesn\'t exist now, and it is somehow because of the internet, just like what you included in your composition.

I am happy to hear your opinion about our replies to each other.

By the way, I totally agree with your opinion about ways that make our lives safer and more dangerous.

I just want to add something.

I think our decisions indicate safety and danger to our lives.

If we have right decisions, we become happy.

If we make wrong decisions, we feel down and stressed.

So, the most important thing that we need to consider in our lives is decision making.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,

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>> OR: Dear [Name],
A happy Thursday to you!
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Whenever I write my composition, I somehow feel that I am doing pen pal with you.
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When I was in my middle school, I used to write letters to some guys who went to military service.
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That was a kind of letter of encouragement to military personnel, and I was sure that it was really helpful for them to live in the military.
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That was very common in Korea at that time, but now, maybe, we can\'t see it easily because of the development of the internet.
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>> OR: That was very common in Korea at that time, but now, maybe, we can\'t see it easily due to some developments like the internet.

Just the thought of it makes me feel nostalgia for my school days. ^^
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Anyway, that\'s all for today and see you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Here is my homework.
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From my thinking, we can\'t define the ways to make our lives safer or more dangerous.
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>> BETTER: From my opinion, we can\'t define the ways where life is becoming safer or dangerous.

Things don\'t go our way easily, so in some ways, we can\'t really control our lives.
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If we can manage our lives as we want without any restriction, there is no one who suffers from the hardships and difficulties in life.
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Life is an endless challenge, so we shouldn\'t think of it simply.
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Even if we are leading smooth lives until now, we can\'t guess when we will be in unexpected hardship.
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Someone says that this kind of thinking is so negative, but who can confidently say \'No\' against my opinion?
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Since we can\'t deny that human beings lives go together with endless sufferings, we must develop the power which we can overcome the hardships.
>> Since we can\'t deny that human beings lives go together with endless sufferings, we must develop the power which we can overcome hardships. (C1 No need to put THE before hardships since you are expressing a general thought.)

>> OR: Since we can\'t deny that human beings lives go together with endless sufferings, we must develop the power which we can overcome challenges.

All we need to do is to see something positive and develop our abilities for choosing something wisely.
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>> OR: All we need to do is to see things positively and develop our abilities for more possibility in choosing something wisely.

Well, it is easier said than done, but I think it is the only way that our lives become safer.

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