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Dear my Gorgeous Student [이름],

A flattering Friday to us! ^.^

Here in the Philippines, it doesn\'t rain very often now.

We are experiencing better weather, but the weather makes me exhausted.

It is because of a dramatic change in weather, but as a whole, for me, having a clear day a better than a rainy day.

What do you think? Hahaha! ^^

Do you envy me? Hahaha! ^^,

Kidding! ^^.

By the way, I am really sorry about what happened yesterday in our class.

I think the jack of the webcam was removed, and it is not that easy to reconnect it, so I just asked your permission to have our class without you seeing my handsome face.

I am really sorry.

Fortunately, my webcam is totally fine now, and you can see my striking face later. Hahaha! ^^

Anyway, I don\'t have any plans yet for this coming weekend, but I am excited to hug Saturday and Sunday tightly. Hahaha! ^^,

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my handsome Teacher Paula,
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A winsome Friday to you!
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Here in Korea, it is raining cats and dogs, so it somehow can remove the humidity in the air.
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By the way, what happened to your webcam yesterday?
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I was sad to be unable to see you through the webcam.
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>> OR: I was sad to be unable to see you on screen.

Did you already find what the problem was?
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I hope I can see your handsome face by the webcam today. ^^
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Anyway, do you have a plan for this coming weekend?
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In my case, I am lazy to go out because of the wet weather.
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In this case, the best way for me to avoid this kind of sweltering weather is that I go to a coffee shop and enjoy a movie that I have wanted to see but haven\'t seen yet with my IPAD.
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>> OR: In this case, the best way for me to avoid this kind of sweltering weather is to go to a coffee shop and enjoy a film that I have wanted to see but haven\'t watched yet using my iPad.

The weather forecast said that this rain will last until tomorrow, so it would be better for me to stay inside.
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>> OR: The weather forecast that this rain will last until tomorrow, so it would be better for me to stay indoors.

Wait, come to think of it, I have to go to see a dermatologist to check my skin condition tomorrow.
>> Wait, come to think of it, I have to see my dermatologist to check my skin condition tomorrow. (C1 I think you regularly see that dermatologist, so A DERMATOLOGIST should be MY DERMATOLOGIST.)

Wait, I also have to change my door lock to an automatic door lock system.
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>> OR: Wait, I also have to change my door lock into automatic lock system.

It doesn\'t matter if the door lock is automatic or manual, but my landlord asked me to change it.
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He is so demanding and annoying.
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I am a tenant, so I have to listen to him well. Hahaha!
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Anyway, I wish you a good plan for this coming weekend and see you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Below is my homework.
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>> OR: Below is my answer to the essay question that you gave yesterday.

From my thinking, when we live, there are many risky things that we can\'t avoid.
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>> BETTER: To my thinking, when we live, there are many risky things that we can\'t avoid.

>> OR: From my opinion, when we live, there are many risky things that we can\'t avoid.

However, sometimes, we are willing to take risks to test and develop ourselves.
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>> OR: However, sometimes, we are willing to take chances and develop ourselves.

For example, someone goes around the world only with some money and one backpack alone.
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To being comfortable, of course, there is an option to choose like a package tour, but that person still took the hard way, because that person already knew a precious lesson that can acquire from going backpacking.
>> To be comfortable, of course, there is an option to choose like a package tour, but that person still took the hard way, because he or she already knew a precious lesson that can acquire from going backpacking. (C2 TO BEING COMFORTABLE should be TO BE COMFORTABLE. Avoid REDUNDANCY.)

Apart from that, we can also see a main character to take a hard and dangerous job in a drama, even if that person is a member of the upper classes.
>> Apart from that, we can also see a main character to take a hard and dangerous job in a drama even if that person is a member of the upper class. (C3 CLASSES should be CLASS. You are only talking about a group of people.)

>> OR: Apart from that, we can also see a main character to take a hard and dangerous role in a drama even if that person is a member of the upper class.

That is also a kind of risk for that person, but, that person doesn\'t avoid danger.
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The reason why he did like this is to accumulate experiences more and learn how to live under that kind of atmosphere.
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>> BETTER: The reason why he did like that is because he wants to accumulate experiences more and learn how to live under that kind of situation.

In conclusion, even if there is a possibility to fail when we take risks, that kind of experience can become a good foundation in life.

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