Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

Good day and happy Monday! ^.^

I am glad that you are having some freedom due to your boss\'s absence in your office.

If I were you, my heart would really jump and dance.

By the way, was there a typhoon in your country last Saturday?

I saw something on Facebook, and it says there that ten months from now, we might experience 4 degrees Celsius hotter temperature because Himalayas\' glaciers are melting rapidly.

I also hope for us not to experience a dramatic change in weather, but I doubt about that.

Anyway, here in Baguio City, Philippines, it didn\'t really rain a lot last Saturday, so we had a great time celebrating for our father\'s 57th birthday.

However, I was a little sad at that time, because a special person wanted to meet me.

It was a shame, because I couldn\'t meet him due to the birthday celebration of my father.

I though that special someone wouldn\'t contact me anymore.

Luckily, he is a very understanding individual, so he still wanted to see me.

He invited me to go out yesterday, and I agreed.

We met at Starbucks, had some talk there and left to check some movies.

After checking on showing movies, we went to a key shop for key duplication.

When he got the keys, he felt so hungry, so we went to Red Station which is a Korean restaurant.

We enjoyed eating, drinking and chatting there.

When we had our stomachs full, we decided to see a movie at his place, not in the mall anymore.

We went to his place, but instead of watching a movie, we just had some talk about the two of us.

In the end, we found out that we really like each other.

We are not couple, but we are special to each other, so we decided to have some date more.

We will meet again this weekend.

Hahaha! ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

See you very soon! ^.^ 

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: We should really follow those health guidelines you included in your composition, especially number 4. ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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I am really happy now, because my boss went to China for his business trip for one week.
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I can somehow get a freedom away from him. ^^
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>> OR: I can somehow get freedom away from him.

>> OR: I can somehow get some freedom away from him.

>> OR: I can somehow be free away from him.

By the way, did you have a wonderful weekend?
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Here in Korea, a heavy rain fell last Saturday, and at the time, I was in a car with my boyfriend.
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>> OR: Here in Korea, a heavy rain fell last Saturday, and at that time, I was in a car with my boyfriend.

We couldn\'t see what is ahead of us due to a sudden downpour, even if we operated windscreen wipers nonstop.
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I thought the raindrops seemed to penetrate into our car.
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A few weeks ago, we had to be worried about a problem of drought.
>> A few weeks ago, we had to worry about a problem of drought. (C1 When you use AGO, be sure that you only have a PAST SIMPLE SENTENCE.)

>> OR: A few weeks ago, we had to worry about a problem caused by drought.

In contrast, we are now facing a problem of flood.
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>> OR: In contrast, we are now facing some problems because of flood.

This situation is so ironic and makes us so embarrassed.
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I hope we can\'t experience a dramatic change in weather any longer. ^^;;
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Anyway, see you very soon! ^^
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[이름]
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P.S.: Below is my answer against a question you gave me.
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>> OR: P.S. Below is my answer to the question you gave me.

When we talk about risk, we can consider two kinds of situations.
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First, there is a big possibility for us to suffer from diseases in our lives.
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To avoid risks of developing various diseases, we should follow some health guidelines.
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1. Quit smoking and drinking.
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2. Lessen getting stressed.
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>> OR: Avoid being stressed to much.

3. Don\'t eat fatty foods.
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4. Do exercise regularly.
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5. Sleep enough.
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Second, we can sometimes face some unexpected accidents by strangers.
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Even if we are so careful in every situation, we can\'t guess when those problems will happen.
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In that case, we should develop our abilities for protecting ourselves from those risks.
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>> OR: In that case, we should develop our abilities for protecting ourselves from those dangers.

It would be also good for us to observe some safety rules that can be easily found everywhere, such as \'Fasten seatbelts or Standing in two lines on the escalators.\'
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In conclusion, all risks are based on our carelessness, so we shouldn\'t neglect fundamental rules that we already know.

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