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Dear my Student [이름],

Thank you for the greeting! ^^

A pleasant Wednesday to you! ^.^

It is my pleasure to make you understand your standing in connection to your English studies.

I am so pleased that you took it positively.

By the way, can you give me some of those corns.

I am somehow addicted to that kind of crop. Hahaha! ^^

That was just kidding. ^^,

I think you really like corns, because you made some time for its storage.

I know that is a lot of work.

Well, congratulations for storing all of those successfully even though you had a problem with the boiling part. ^^.

Anyway, happy reading and see you very soon! ^^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
>> Dear my Teacher Paula,

A blissful Wednesday to you!
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First of all, it was a meaningful time for me in our last class.
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>> OR: First of all, I had a meaningful time with you in our last class.

You helped me to think of my current status and understand more about my weaknesses on learning English.
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It was a great time for me to look back on myself. ^^
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Just like what you said in our last class, I will be consistent and concentrate more on speaking in English.
>> Just like what you said in our last class, I will be consistent and focused more on speaking in English. (C1 It is better if you use FOCUSED rather than CONCENTRATED.)

Student must listen to teacher\'s order. Hahaha! ^^
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>> OR: A student must listen to her or his teacher\'s order.

By the way, yesterday, my boyfriend\'s uncle dispatched a sack of corns to us.
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At this time of the year, it is time to harvest crops here in Korea, so those corns are also fresh.
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I was very happy for getting them, but I instantly started to worry about storage.
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>> OR: I was very happy for getting them, but I instantly started to worry about storing them.

>> OR: I was very happy for getting them, but I instantly started to worry about how to store them.

In the end, my boyfriend and I began to boil them after peeling the corns.
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>> BETTER: In the end, my boyfriend and I began to boil the corns after peeling them.

It almost took one and a half hours to boil them in twice, because we didn\'t have a large pot to boil at once. ^^;;
>> It almost took one and a half hours to boil them twice, because we didn\'t have a large pot to boil them at once. (C2 It is better to remove IN before TWICE. Furthermore, there should be THEM after BOIL.)

After finishing that work, we packed corns in individual plastic bags into my freezer.
>> C3 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: After finishing that work, we packed those corns in individual plastic bags and put them into my freezer.

I somehow feel reassured when something to eat is in my freezer. Hahaha! ^^;;
>> I somehow feel reassured when there\'s something to eat in my freezer. (C4 To complete your sentence, there should be THERE\'S after WHEN.)

Anyway, that\'s all for today and see you very soon! ^^
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[이름]
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P.S.: Here is my homework.
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*Subject: Adventure equals success.
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>> BETTER: Adventure Equals Success

In the process of our growth, we stand at a large number of choices.
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Normally, we agonize about what we should choose between an adventurous and a guaranteed way.
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Most people usually select the easy way not to take risks.
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>> OR: Most people usually select the easy way in order to take risks.

Of course, there is nothing better than leading a smooth life without any risks.
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However, is it possible?

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We shouldn\'t look down on our lives.
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There is a saying that failure is a mother of success.
>> C5 I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY MEAN IS: There is a saying that failure is the mother of success.

Even if it is obvious to have risks when we have adventure, we should become a capable person who can cope with hardship by various experiences.
>> Even if it is obvious to have risks when we have adventure, we should become capable people who can cope with hardship by various experiences. (C6 Since you used WE, you should remove A before CAPABLE.)

Well, that is life and truth.

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