Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Happy Friday! Our central air-conditioning system has been fixed, so I could totally remove my worry about the heat. The person who we talked yesterday is so efficient. Hahaha! ^^ By the way, my boss decided to take a stranger to our office to share our office room. It is to cut down our rental fee, so that person will have to bear 20% of the fee. Well, I somehow feel uncomfortable and awkward when I am thinking that I have to stay with that person in the same place for a whole day. On the other hand, it can help our company's financial situation, so I decided to think of it positively. I have to discuss about how to rearrange our desks with our coworkers. ^^;; Anyway, I wish you a wonderful time with your significant other on this coming weekend. See you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Here is my homework. Pros and cons of seeing newspaper Nowadays, as the development of the internet, newspaper is becoming obsolete. We can get a huge amount of information from the internet for free, so newspaper is not considered as an important media any further. Almost all young generation is good at handling computer and internet, so for them, newspaper is just a paper. Above all, it is uncomfortable to carry, especially in a small space. The size of that is a 16 by 20 inches in each dimension, so it is possible to harm other people in public when the newspaper is spread out. However, even if there are some disadvantages on seeing newspapers, we can't discontinue publish newspapers. There are still a lot of people using that, especially older people who are not skilled at searching the internet. In spite of this demand, I cautiously predict that newspaper will disappear gradually.

Dear my Student [이름],   T.G.I.F.~~~!!! ^.^ Happy Friday! ^^   I am really happy that you don\'t have any problems with the heat in your office. I think you were so relieved when it finally worked again. Hahaha! ^^ I can imagine your face at that time. Hahaha! ^^, It was like you were in cloud 9.   By the way, the stranger you were talking about seems kind. He\'s willing to share the place with all of you in your company. Well, he will be your friend. ^^   Anyway, that\'s all for today! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Happy Friday! >> CORRECT! Our central air-conditioning system has been fixed, so I could totally remove my worry about the heat. >> CORRECT! The person who we talked yesterday is so efficient. Hahaha! ^^>> CORRECT! By the way, my boss decided to take a stranger to our office to share our office room. >> CORRECT! It is to cut down our rental fee, so that person will have to bear 20% of the fee. >> CORRECT! Well, I somehow feel uncomfortable and awkward when I am thinking that I have to stay with that person in the same place for a whole day. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, I somehow feel uncomfortable and awkward when I think that I have to stay with that person in the same place for one whole day. On the other hand, it can help our company\'s financial situation, so I decided to think of it positively. >> CORRECT! >> OR: On the other hand, it can help our company\'s financial situation, so I decided to look on the bright side. I have to discuss about how to rearrange our desks with our coworkers. ^^;;>> CORRECT! Anyway, I wish you a wonderful time with your significant other on this coming weekend. >> CORRECT! See you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Here is my homework.>> CORRECT! Pros and cons of seeing newspaper >> Pros and Cons of Seeing Newspapers (C1 This seems to be the title of your homework, so you should capitalize the first letters of the important words. Furthermore, NEWSPAPER should be NEWSPAPERS.) Nowadays, as the development of the internet, newspaper is becoming obsolete.>> CORRECT! We can get a huge amount of information from the internet for free, so newspaper is not considered as an important media any further. >> CORRECT! Almost all young generation is good at handling computer and internet, so for them, newspaper is just a paper. >> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU MEAN IS: Almost all members of the young generation are good at computers and internet, so for them, newspaper is just a paper. >> OR: Young generation is good at computers and internet, so for them, newspaper is just a paper. Above all, it is uncomfortable to carry, especially in a small space. >> CORRECT! The size of that is a 16 by 20 inches in each dimension, so it is possible to harm other people in public when the newspaper is spread out. >> The size of that is 16 by 20 inches in each dimension, so it is possible to harm other people in public when the newspaper is spread out. (C3 There should be no A before 16.) However, even if there are some disadvantages on seeing newspapers, we can\'t discontinue publish newspapers. >> C4 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: However, even if there are some disadvantages on seeing newspapers, we can\'t discontinue publishing them. There are still a lot of people using that, especially older people who are not skilled at searching the internet. >> CORRECT! >> OR: There are still a lot of people using that, especially older people who are not skilled at searching things on the web. >> OR: There are still a lot of people using that, especially older people who are not techie. In spite of this demand, I cautiously predict that newspaper will disappear gradually. >> CORRECT!