Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A good day to you! Did you enjoy your weekend to the fullest? In my case, I went to see a movie with my female friends last Saturday, and we had a wonderful time after a long time. Yesterday, I went to a coffee shop alone to avoid the heat. I packed a few books and IPAD to kill my time there for a long time. I was the person who got there earliest, and I could take up a good seat that I prefer. It was nine o'clock, and I ordered a cup of iced Americano. The coffee shop where I went to uses fragmented ice, so I usually like going there to drink beverages. In addition, I can get a discount if I go there before 02:00 PM. About one and a half hours later, one couple sat beside my table, and I started to be interrupted by them. Of course, I shouldn't be offended by them, because coffee shops are usually considered as public places. However, they constantly kissed and touched each other with affection, and they even went too much. Furthermore, the girl acted charming too much, so she made me almost threw up. I thought to myself, "Why don't you two guys get a room at a hotel?" In order not to be interrupted by them any further, I wore earphones and started to listen to classic music. In the end, I could feel calm and concentrate on my tasks. It was a really offensive time there. After four hours away from that time, I went back home to prepare our dinner. Maybe, you already know that the word 'our' indicated me and my boyfriend. ^^ I went to the public market to buy some ingredients for making Ginseng Chicken Soup. Here in Korea, we usually experience the heat of the dog days in summer, and we have a custom of eating Ginseng Chicken Soup in order to warding off the heat. This year, we haven't eaten that yet, so I especially decided to make that to strengthen ourselves with tonics yesterday. That was my first time to make that in person, but the taste was not that bad. Green Onion [이름]chi seemed to add flavor to that. There is still some remaining soup in my refrigerator, and that is my dinner menu today. ^^ That's all for today and see you very soon! [이름]

Hi there, Beautiful [이름]! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   A good day also to you! ^^,   Well, I enjoyed my weekend to the fullest more with my boyfriend. What I mean is that I spent more time last weekend with my boyfriend. It started last Friday. We met after my shift at work, but honestly that time, I wanted to go home, because I was already exhausted that time. Besides, he was also late. T.T I hate waiting, and I don\'t like men who are late. Hahaha! ^^ He apologized a lot that time, so I forgave him. At first, we planned to meet at Camping Date which is a restaurant. However, we didn\'t like the place because of some undesirable smell. Therefore, we decided to go to Cafe Will which is also a restaurant, but it is one of my boyfriend\'s favorite places here in Baguio City. We ordered some foods and drinks there. We stayed there for a long time. After there, we wanted to drink some coffee, so we headed to Kafe Klutch, but they were about to close. Our interest to have some coffee disappeared, so we just decided to go home. That was our Friday date. Hahaha! ^^   Last Saturday, I told my boyfriend that I already had an appointment and that is to attend one of my friends\' late birthday celebration. Her name is Merfy, and her birthday was last July 31. That was last Friday. ^^ Since my boyfriend didn\'t have any appointments that day, I invited him to go with me there, and he agreed, so we bought Garlic Buttered Chicken as a share for the party and went to my friend\'s house at 8 PM with my two other friends. My two other friends\' names are Maan and Joy. Anyway, when we got there at 8:30 PM, we immediately started the party. We ate, chatted, laughed, drank some alcohol and watched some movies together. Around eleven in the evening, my boyfriend asked me if we could go home since he needed to be awake early in the morning for their academy\'s new students. Though I still wanted to stay, I left the party and my friends with him and went home.   Yesterday, I didn\'t see my boyfriend due to his personal matters. He worked and attended a birthday party. In my case, I stayed home and had some time with my family. We had some eating bonding. Hahaha! ^^   That\'s all for my weekend! ^^, See you very soon! ^^. Happy reading! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A good day to you! >> CORRECT! Did you enjoy your weekend to the fullest?>> CORRECT! In my case, I went to see a movie with my female friends last Saturday, and we had a wonderful time after a long time. >> In my case, I went to see a movie with my female friends last Saturday, and we had a wonderful time after a long time of not seeing each other. (C1 I think your sentence is not yet complete, so I added OF NOT SEEING EACH OTHER.) Yesterday, I went to a coffee shop alone to avoid the heat. >> CORRECT! I packed a few books and IPAD to kill my time there for a long time. >> I packed a few books and an iPad to kill my time there for a long time. (C2 IPAD should be typed as iPad, and there should be AN before it.) >> OR: I packed a few books and an iPad to kill time there for a long time. I was the person who got there earliest, and I could take up a good seat that I prefer. >> CORRECT! It was nine o\'clock, and I ordered a cup of iced Americano.>> CORRECT! The coffee shop where I went to uses fragmented ice, so I usually like going there to drink beverages.>> CORRECT! >> OR: The coffee shop where I went to uses ice cubes, so I usually like going there to drink beverages. In addition, I can get a discount if I go there before 02:00 PM. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In addition, I can get a markdown if I go there before 2 o\'clock in the afternoon. About one and a half hours later, one couple sat beside my table, and I started to be interrupted by them. >> CORRECT! Of course, I shouldn\'t be offended by them, because coffee shops are usually considered as public places.>> CORRECT! However, they constantly kissed and touched each other with affection, and they even went too much. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, they constantly kissed and touched each other with affection, and they even went further. Furthermore, the girl acted charming too much, so she made me almost threw up. >> C3 I THINK IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Furthermore, the girl acted too charmingly, so she made me almost threw up. I thought to myself, \"Why don\'t you two guys get a room at a hotel?\">> CORRECT! In order not to be interrupted by them any further, I wore earphones and started to listen to classic music. >> In order not to be interrupted by them any further, I wore earphones and started to listen to classical music. (C4 CLASSIC should be CLASSICAL.) >> OR: In order not to be interrupted by them any further, I wore my earphones and started to listen to classical music. In the end, I could feel calm and concentrate on my tasks. >> CORRECT! It was a really offensive time there. >> CORRECT! After four hours away from that time, I went back home to prepare our dinner. >> CORRECT! Maybe, you already know that the word \'our\' indicated me and my boyfriend. ^^>> CORRECT! I went to the public market to buy some ingredients for making Ginseng Chicken Soup. >> CORRECT! Here in Korea, we usually experience the heat of the dog days in summer, and we have a custom of eating Ginseng Chicken Soup in order to warding off the heat. >> Here in Korea, we usually experience the heat of the dog days in summer, and we have a custom of eating Ginseng Chicken Soup in order to ward off the heat. (C5 TO WARDING OFF is wrong. It should be TO WARD OFF.) >> BETTER: Here in Korea, we usually experience the heat of the dog days in summer, and we have a custom of eating Ginseng Chicken Soup in order to ward the heat off. This year, we haven\'t eaten that yet, so I especially decided to make that to strengthen ourselves with tonics yesterday. >> CORRECT! That was my first time to make that in person, but the taste was not that bad. >> CORRECT! >> OR: That was my first time to make that. Fortunately, the taste wasn\'t that bad. Green Onion [이름]chi seemed to add flavor to that. >> CORRECT! There is still some remaining soup in my refrigerator, and that is my dinner menu today. ^^>> CORRECT! >> OR: There is still some remaining soup in my refrigerator, and that will be my dinner tonight. That\'s all for today and see you very soon!>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!