Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
A blissful day to you! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^,^
To start, there is no need for you to say sorry.
Putting our classes on hold is one of your benefits as a Power English student.
We know that you won\'t do that unless you are caught in the middle of an important thing, so don\'t worry about that.
Besides, I had some time to rest and bond with other teacher at my workplace. Hahaha! ^^
Well, thank you for informing me the reason why our class yesterday was out on hold.
By the way, do you feel comfortable with where your desk is located now?
In addition, were you annoyed when you couldn\'t remove the ink on your hands? Hahaha! ^^
I am just kidding, but if you want to answer my second question, it is okay. Hahaha! ^^,
Anyway, I heard things about your Independence Day, and they are the same with what you said.
My co-workers and I are also looking forward to that.
Most of us also want to have some rest on that day. Hahaha! ^^.
However, we won\'t be paid because of the \'No-Work-No-Pay Policy.\'
Well, that is okay, because, our health and happiness is more important than money. ^^
I hope our bosses can give us our break on that day. Hahaha! ^^,
That\'s all for now! ^^
I will wait for the update that you promised. Hahaha! ^^,
See you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A good day to you!
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First of all, I\'d like to say sorry about my absence yesterday.
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Can you remember that someone will share our office room together?
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That\'s why we had to rearrange our desks yesterday before he comes here.
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I shifted my desk near our coworkers\' desks, and the position is not that bad.
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By the time we finished those placement, it was almost 7 o\'clock in the evening.
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I already guessed that it would take longer than I thought.
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That\'s why I put our class on hold.
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Now, I am writing my daily composition in my new place.
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There are still some tasks to be rearranged, especially our printer and fax machine.
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I also didn\'t finish cleaning my desk yet.
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While I was trying to install our printer, the ink got on my hands, but the stain didn\'t wash away in spite of using soup and kitchen cleaner to wash that many times.
>> While I was trying to install our printer, the ink got on my hands, but the stain didn\'t wash away in spite of using soap and kitchen cleaner many times. (C1 SOUP should be SOAP. It is better to remove TO WASH THAT since you already used WASH AWAY.)
As I heard, in that case, baking powder will help me to clean the ink stain.
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I will let you know the result very soon. ^^
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By the way, August 15 is Korea\'s Independence Day, and it is on Saturday this year, so our government decided to designate August 14 as a temporary holiday.
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>> OR: By the way, August 15 is our Independence Day, and it falls on Saturday this year, so our government decided to move the celebration on August 14.
In that case, it is considered as an observance, so I don\'t know if our company also will allow us to rest on that day.
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I haven\'t seen my boss in 6 days because of his summer vacation, so I should remind him about the temporary holiday to get an extra day off after he gets back here.
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Well, wish me good luck! ^^
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Anyway, that is all for now and see you this evening!
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[이름]
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