Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
Happy Wednesday! ^.^
I am glad that you already removed the stain from the ink that stayed in your hand since yesterday.
You did a great job removing it.
I think you are right about the effectiveness of warm water to remove stains.
By the way, I am happy to hear that you were okay with what your boss just did to you at work.
Well, about your question, WASH is a verb, it can be a transitive and an intransitive verb.
THE STAIN DIDN\'T WASH AWAY is correct.
While THE STAIN DIDN\'T BE WASHED AWAY is wrong.
Always remember the pattern DIDN\'T + BASE-VERB.
I hope I answered your question properly.
Anyway, thank you making your composition! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you tomorrow! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A happy Wednesday to you!
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The ink stain was washed away finally, and the condition of my hands was back to normal.
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However, I didn\'t use a brush to wash that, but I just took a shower.
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I thought the warm water seemed effective to get rid of that.
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By the way, today, our boss showed up in our office and started nagging at me in relation to our business.
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>> OR: By the way, our boss showed up in our office today and started nagging at me in relation to our business.
It is a normal situation, so I didn\'t think of it awkwardly.
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However, I heard a bad news from him that there is a possibility that the person who is supposed to share our office room together will cancel his plan.
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How can he reverse his decision so easily when I and our coworkers already rearranged our desks?
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We felt so annoyed about this possibility, but we can\'t know the final result for now, so we would just have to wait and see.
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Changing the topic, I have a question about my last composition.
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I am somehow curious about what is correct between \'The stain didn\'t wash away.\' and \'The stain didn\'t be washed away.\'
>> I am somehow curious about which is correct between \'The stain didn\'t wash away\' and The stain didn\'t be washed away.\'
As I know, the word of \'wash\' is a transitive verb, so in that case, that word should be written as \'be washed\' if I want to write an object as a subject.
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Sometimes, there are exceptions in grammar, so I am a little confused about that.
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Please make me understand that. ^^;
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Thanks in advance for your help. ^^
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That is all for now and see you very soon.
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>> OR: That is all for now and see you very soon!
[이름]
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P.S.: Below is my homework.
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Read Books!
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Needless to say, reading books is the most important task in our lives.
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There is a saying that books are food for the mind.
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It is well known that we can learn a lot of good lessons and wisdom from books.
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However, nowadays, people have no enough time to read books due to their business.
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>> OR: However, nowadays, people don\'t have enough time to read books due to their busyness.
>> OR: However, nowadays, people don\'t have enough time to read books due to their own businesses.
In addition, there are many things that attract people\'s mind, such as games and TV programs.
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In my case, I also read only one book in a month, and I think it is not enough to make my knowledge grow more.
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I should reflect on myself instead of making an excuse for not reading many books due to my busyness.
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