Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! First of all, I am thankful for making me understand about grammar. I can totally understand the rule. Today, I still have a question. ^^ Yesterday, I said that I am content with my life, and you helped me to revise that as I am contended with my life. From what I gather, the word 'content' is an adjective and a verb, so I thought I could use it like 'be content with.' Grammar is so hard for me to learn. Please help to make me clear again. ^^ By the way, I searched and asked about if there are CCTVs in classrooms. Because of students' privacy, it is illegal to be installed. I am also thinking that if I am in some places where many CCTVs are observing me, I will feel unpleasant. Maybe, there in the Philippines might be also the same situation with us. Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. Mass media like talking about well-known people's everything. It is to attract people's attention and be directly connected to income. The presses earn money according to the number of clicking on their articles on the website. Because of the reason, there are a lot of articles that are stimulating, disgusting and inaccurate being published constantly. Even the government discloses some disturbing information in relation to celebrities' privacy to divert people's attention away from the bad situation which the government is under currently. It is indeed a kind of typical control of mass media. That's why mass media are losing their trust day by day. People are thirsty for seeking objective truths, so in that case, podcast can be a really good and interesting alternative.

Dear [Name] [이름],   Happy Thursday! ^.^ A favorable day for both of us! ^^   Thank you for the positive writing about my answer to your question yesterday! ^^, However, I hope I can help you more.   By the way, about the word CONTENT, you are right that it can be used as a verb and an adjective. In addition, it can also be used as a noun. Therefore, your statement before is correct, but it is more common to say I AM CONTENTED WITH MY LIFE. Well, I hope I helped you clear things up. ^^.   Anyway, here in the Philippines, there are installed CCTV cameras at schools but not inside classrooms. It is also because of what you said on your composition. Privacy is very important, and a person freely moves when he or she knows that no one is observing him or her, right? ^^ On the other hand, I think putting CCTV cameras inside classrooms can be beneficial for teachers and students.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Have a fun time reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! >> OR: Dear Teacher Paula, >> OR: Dear [Name], Good day!>> CORRECT! First of all, I am thankful for making me understand about grammar. >> CORRECT! I can totally understand the rule. >> CORRECT! Today, I still have a question. ^^>> CORRECT! Yesterday, I said that I am content with my life, and you helped me to revise that as I am contended with my life. >> CORRECT! From what I gather, the word \'content\' is an adjective and a verb, so I thought I could use it like \'be content with.\' >> CORRECT! Grammar is so hard for me to learn. >> CORRECT! Please help to make me clear again. ^^ >> C1 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Please help to make things clear again. >> Please help me to make things to be clear again. >> OR: Please help me make this matter clear. By the way, I searched and asked about if there are CCTVs in classrooms. >> By the way, I searched and asked if there are CCTVs in classrooms. (C2 WHAT ABOUT IF is used when your first opinion is somehow rejected, so for your second idea, you can use this expression.) >> OR: By the way, I searched and asked about the existence of CCTVs in classrooms. Because of students\' privacy, it is illegal to be installed. >> CORRECT! I am also thinking that if I am in some places where many CCTVs are observing me, I will feel unpleasant. >> CORRECT! Maybe, there in the Philippines might be also the same situation with us. >> Maybe, there in the Philippines, there is also the same situation with us. (C3 MAYBE and MIGHT shouldn\'t be used in one sentence. It is to avoid redundancy.) >> BETTER: There in the Philippines, the same situation might also happen. Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my homework. >> CORRECT! Mass media like talking about well-known people\'s everything. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Mass media like talking about everything connected to well-known people. It is to attract people\'s attention and be directly connected to income. >> CORRECT! The presses earn money according to the number of clicking on their articles on the website.>> The press earn money according to the number of clicks on their articles on the website. (C4 NUMBER OF CLICKING should be NUMBER OF CLICKS.) >> OR: The press earn money according to the number of views on their articles on the website. Because of the reason, there are a lot of articles that are stimulating, disgusting and inaccurate being published constantly. >> C5 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Because of the reason, there are a lot of articles that are stimulating, disgusting and inaccurate that are being published constantly. Even the government discloses some disturbing information in relation to celebrities\' privacy to divert people\'s attention away from the bad situation which the government is under currently. >> CORRECT! It is indeed a kind of typical control of mass media. >> CORRECT! That\'s why mass media are losing their trust day by day. >> C6 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: That\'s why the public are losing their trust to mass media day by day. >> OR: That\'s why mass media are losing trust from the public day by day. People are thirsty for seeking objective truths, so in that case, podcast can be a really good and interesting alternative. >> CORRECT!