Composition

Dear [Name] [이름],

A mirthful day to us! ^.^

Happy Friday! ^^

Ohhh~~~!

We somehow had a similar situation last night.

Frankly speaking, I feel asleep around 3 AM, but it wasn\'t because of the hot weather.

It was due to my brain\'s busyness thinking about someone.

Unfortunately, you are right! Hahaha! ^^

I was thinking about my boyfriend.

I fought with him because of our complicated relationship.

I was complaining about our time for each other.

Honestly speaking, it is very difficult for me to stay in this kind of relationship that we have right now.

Anyway, I hope you will have a peaceful and comfortable sleep tonight! ^^

By the way, I would like to say VERY GOOD for doing a well-composed writing.

I can feel your seriousness when you made your composition, and I agree to each and everything that you said.

That\'s all for now! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

See you really soon! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear [Name],
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Hi!
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>> OR: Hello!

Yesterday, I couldn\'t sleep well because of the extreme heat.
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I don\'t have an air conditioner, so I was exhausted by the heat.
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>> OR: I don\'t have an air-conditioner, so I was exhausted because of the heat.

My thermometer read 35 degrees Celsius in my place, and the weather was suffocating me.
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>> OR: My thermometer read 35 degrees Celsius at my place, and the weather was suffocating.

Even if I turned two fans on constantly, but they couldn\'t cool me down.
>> Even if I turned two fans on constantly, they still couldn\'t cool me down. (C1 EVEN and BUT can\'t be used in one sentence.)

>> OR: I turned two fans on constantly, but they still couldn\'t cool me down.

In addition, to avoid mosquitoes\' attack, I set up a mosquito net, so it made me feel hotter.
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As an alternative, I held a frozen water bottle.
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>> OR: As an alternative, I held a bottle of frozen water.

It was so effective for me to sleep, and I could manage to fall asleep.
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>> OR: It was so effective that I could manage to fall asleep because of it.

However, suddenly, the mosquito net\'s hook had broken, so I woke up and stayed awake for a while.
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The heat this year is so nasty in comparison to last summer.
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I hope this terrible heat can be over as soon as possible.
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See you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Below is my homework.
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In my opinion, the media should be allowed to publish stories about the private lives of celebrities.
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Celebrities also endure the situations where they are.
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Why is they called \'Public figure\'?
>> Why are they called \'Public Figures\'? (C2 Since you used THEY, IS should be ARE, and FIGURE should be FIGURES. In addition, it is better to capitalize FIGURES.)

It is because they maintain their reputation by the public.
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Let\'s say there is an actor who is a big star, and everybody knows him.
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Because of his popularity, a lot of people want to know about his every movement.
>> C3 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: Because of his popularity, a lot of people want to know about every moment of his life.

If the public doesn\'t give attention to him any further, he won\'t survive in the entertainment industry.
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In that case, he will miss people\'s attention, even if that is extremely excessive.
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In other words, popularity is directly connected to someone\'s reputation and wealth, and it is impossible for someone to have his or her cake and eat it.

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