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Dear [Name], Good morning! How is the weather there? Here in Korea, the force of the heat is still strong, so it is very hard for me to stay without an air conditioner. This coming Wednesday is the last of the three dog days, so I am somehow looking forward to the cool weather. I am already experiencing the cool weather in the morning and at night, so I don't need to hold a bottle of frozen water any further when I sleep. Suddenly, I am thinking that time flies so fast. By the way, our customers are back to normal from their summer vacation today. The off season is not still done yet in our field, but, somehow, I should prepare for my busyness. That is all for today and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. By the way, did you make up with your significant other? ^^;; Keep Fit! There are two ways to keep myself fit. First, I try to control my eating habit. I eat meals regularly and don't eat too much. In addition, I avoid eating fatty and salty foods as far as possible. However, if I control myself so strictly, there will be a possibility for me to give up. In that case, I give myself freedom of eating whatever I want every Sunday. It is a kind of reward for my effort, and it is a very important point when we make a good eating habit. Second, I don't neglect exercise every day. Modern people mainly sit and work all day. Sitting for a long time is very harmful to our body, and it leads to accumulating too much fat on our body. There are some good ways to move our body to use our spare time for a moment. 1. Lift legs while sitting! 2. Tighten stomach and straighten back! 3. Stretch arms! 4. Don't use elevator and escalator and just walk! 5. Don't sit down in the public transportation when you go to and leave work. Those are so easy to follow in our daily lives, but many people are lazy to do them. Let's start them from today in order not to regret late after suffering from diseases.

Dear [Name] [이름],   A encouraging day to us! ^.^ Happy Monday! ^^   To start, let me say VERY GOOD for making a perfect writing. You didn\'t make any mistakes. Let me thank you also for sharing your thoughts to me. ^^, Now, it\'s my time to share mine. Hahaha! ^^ This morning, the weather was a little hot. It was good, because it wasn\'t irritating. Good for me and other citizens of Baguio City. Hahaha! ^^. I feel good that the last day of your three dog days will be come soon. I know how you and other Koreans suffer because of those days, and I salute you for enduring them. I am so happy also that you won\'t need to use a bottle of frozen water just to help you sleep at night. You can have more comfortable sleep then.   By the way, I hope you won\'t be that busy because of your tasks at work. Oh, wait! ^^ Do you already have any news about your moved National Liberation Day? In my case, our supervisors just told us to wait for further notice.   Anyway, you asked about my situation with my ex-boyfriend. Yes, you read it right! ^^, He is already my ex-boyfriend. I broke up with him last Friday due to our lack of time for each other. I think time is one of the foundations of a relationship. It is one of the factors that can make the connection of two people strong. We don\'t have it, so I decided to give up, and I think he also gave up.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I will follow your tips on how to keep fit, because I badly need to be healthy! ^.^     Dear [Name], >> CORRECT! Good morning! >> CORRECT! How is the weather there?>> CORRECT! Here in Korea, the force of the heat is still strong, so it is very hard for me to stay without an air conditioner. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Here in Korea, the force of heat is still strong, so it is very hard for me to stay somewhere without an air conditioner. This coming Wednesday is the last of the three dog days, so I am somehow looking forward to the cool weather. >> CORRECT! I am already experiencing the cool weather in the morning and at night, so I don\'t need to hold a bottle of frozen water any further when I sleep. >> CORRECT! Suddenly, I am thinking that time flies so fast. >> CORRECT! By the way, our customers are back to normal from their summer vacation today.>> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, our customers are today back to normal from their summer vacation. The off season is not still done yet in our field, but, somehow, I should prepare for my busyness. >> CORRECT! >> OR: The off season is still not yet done in our field, but, somehow, I should prepare for my time to be busy again. That is all for today and see you very soon!>> CORRECT! [이름]>> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my homework. >> CORRECT! By the way, did you make up with your significant other? ^^;; >> CORRECT!   >> BETTER: P.S.: By the way, did you make up with your significant other? Anyway, below is my homework.   Keep Fit! >> CORRECT! There are two ways to keep myself fit.>> CORRECT! First, I try to control my eating habit.>> CORRECT! I eat meals regularly and don\'t eat too much.>> CORRECT! In addition, I avoid eating fatty and salty foods as far as possible. >> CORRECT! However, if I control myself so strictly, there will be a possibility for me to give up. >> CORRECT! In that case, I give myself freedom of eating whatever I want every Sunday. >> CORRECT! It is a kind of reward for my effort, and it is a very important point when we make a good eating habit. >> CORRECT! Second, I don\'t neglect exercise every day. >> CORRECT! Modern people mainly sit and work all day. >> CORRECT! Sitting for a long time is very harmful to our body, and it leads to accumulating too much fat on our body. >> CORRECT! There are some good ways to move our body to use our spare time for a moment. >> CORRECT! 1. Lift legs while sitting!>> CORRECT! 2. Tighten stomach and straighten back! >> CORRECT! 3. Stretch arms!>> CORRECT! 4. Don\'t use elevator and escalator and just walk! >> CORRECT! >> OR: Don\'t use elevators and escalators! Just walk! 5. Don\'t sit down in the public transportation when you go to and leave work. >> CORRECT! Those are so easy to follow in our daily lives, but many people are lazy to do them. >> CORRECT! Let\'s start them from today in order not to regret late after suffering from diseases. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Let\'s start them from today in order not to regret anything in the end and after suffering from any diseases.