Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, my Stunning Student [이름]! ^.^
Happy Tuesday! ^^
A blessed day to us! ^^,
Thank you for answering my question like it was your priority in making your composition. ^^.
I am happy for you, because you will have more time for yourself.
In addition, you won\'t really have a very busy schedule because of your Chinese co-workers\' holiday thing.
I am glad that your boss is in the mood nowadays.
I am delighted to hear about that.
He is so lucky. ^^
By the way, I commend you for making your homework.
You did a great job! ^^,
Once again, you made a perfect composition.
Excellent~~~!!! ^^.
Frankly speaking, because of your homework, I want to challenge you for a basketball match.
That game will be between us. Hahaha! ^^
I know that you are taller than me, but that won\'t stop me from competing with you.
I will do my best to win. Hahaha! ^^,
I really hope we can play games together.
You said you are good at ball games.
Then, playing bowling is just a piece of cake for you, right? ^^.
Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A happy Tuesday to you!
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First of all, I will answer you about your question.
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Our company allowed us to take a holiday on our moved National Liberation Day.
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I didn\'t remind our boss, but he brought up the subject first.
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>> OR: I didn\'t remind our boss about it, but he brought the topic up first.
Taking advantage of this holiday, I also asked for a leave of absence from my work next Monday, so I can take 4 days off in a row.
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The reason why our boss is so kind these days is because his hair begins to grow again.
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Not that long ago, he was suffering from a symptom of hair loss, but after taking prostate pills for months, his symptom has been getting better.
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Indeed, he looks like he sleeps with a hanger in his mouth every day.
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Well, I am also happy for him. ^^
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By the way, I was supposed to take my summer vacation next week, but I have postponed my schedule until October.
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Wherever I go, the heat is annoying me, so I decided to change my plan totally.
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>> OR: Wherever I go, the heat annoys me, so I decided to change my plan totally.
Fortunately, at that time of year, our Chinese coworkers have their national holiday for a week, so I don\'t need to care for my tasks.
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I would have to consider where to go to enjoy my vacation thoroughly from now.
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That is all for now and see you very soon!
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P.S.: Below is my homework.
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Stiff Body!
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In my case, I am not fond of sports.
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I think my body doesn\'t follow my brain\'s order so well.
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When I was in my school days, I somehow disliked a sport curriculum, so I used to get a poor grade.
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>> OR: In my school days, I somehow disliked a sport curriculum, so I used to get a poor grade.
However, come to think of it, I seemed to have a talent for ball games, such as basketball, volleyball, kickball and so on.
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I remember that I had a good grade on the basketball test at that time.
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Because of my height, I was proposed to be a basketball player once.
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>> OR: Because of my height, I was asked to play as a basketball player once for our school.
However, I was not that interested in that filed, so I didn\'t ever think about that.
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>> OR: However, I was not that interested in that field, so I didn\'t even consider that.
Well, I somehow think that was a good decision. Hahaha! ^^
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