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Dear my Teacher Paula, A happy Thursday to you! First of all, I am sorry for our last class's my performance. At that time, my boyfriend was cooking beef for our dinner, and it was so smoky that it made me cough. Because of that, I could not concentrate on our class for a while. I do apologize. After our class, I scolded him about this situation and ordered him to open a ventilation system when he is cooking. By the way, I just saw the notice on the website that Power English would not give you a day off on our temporary holiday. What a bad news! I have somehow expected that you also could have a day off with me, so the moment I saw that, I felt upset. However, here in Korea, many people also can't enjoy the unexpected chance, so there are a lot of blames for our government's rough and ready administration. Frankly speaking, I don't also like a sudden event which is not fair to all people. On that day, our government is planning to allow us not to pay any tollgate fees when we use the expressway. However, where can the Expressway Public Corporation make up for their loss from? Of course, it is from taxes paid by hard-working citizens. The reason why our government made this kind of decision suddenly is because they don't have any outstanding achievements in a period of their regime. Moreover, in order to divert people's attention from various accidents caused by our government, they decided to celebrate our National Liberation Day more especially even if it is not its 50th or 100th anniversary. For your reference, we celebrate its 70th anniversary this year. Anyway, since they already designated August 14th as a temporary holiday, well, I am going to just enjoy that. When it comes to politics, I am somehow being negative. ^^;; Don't be affected by that. ^^ That is all for today and see you very soon! [이름]

Dear my Student [이름],   A rebellious Thursday to us! ^.^ Hahaha! ^,^ I am just kidding! ^^   A beautiful Thursday to beautiful women like us! *^.^*   First of all, I would like to stop you from saying sorry, because you didn\'t do anything bad. Your performance in our class yesterday is good. There\'s nothing to be sorry about. ^^ However, I agree with what you did to your boyfriends. Hahaha! ^^, It is not that I am against with him. I just know that any kind of smoke can be dangerous to human body. What you said to him is for the sake of the two of you. ^^.   By the way, don\'t feel bad for I will go to work tomorrow. It is better to be at work tomorrow than not and won\'t have pay. Hahaha! ^^   Anyway, about your country\'s Liberation Day issues, it is just fine that you react like that. It means that you are on your people\'s side not on your government\'s side. Hahaha! ^^   That\'s all! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A happy Thursday to you!>> CORRECT! First of all, I am sorry for our last class\'s my performance. >> First of all, I am sorry for my performance in our last class. (C1 PATTERN: Paula\'s performance = performance of Paula) At that time, my boyfriend was cooking beef for our dinner, and it was so smoky that it made me cough. >> CORRECT! Because of that, I could not concentrate on our class for a while. >> CORRECT! I do apologize. >> CORRECT! After our class, I scolded him about this situation and ordered him to open a ventilation system when he is cooking. >> CORRECT! >> OR: After our class, I scolded him about this situation and ordered him to make sure that my room is well-ventilated when he is cooking. By the way, I just saw the notice on the website that Power English would not give you a day off on our temporary holiday. >> CORRECT! What a bad news! >> CORRECT! I have somehow expected that you also could have a day off with me, so the moment I saw that, I felt upset.>> CORRECT! However, here in Korea, many people also can\'t enjoy the unexpected chance, so there are a lot of blames for our government\'s rough and ready administration. >> CORRECT! Frankly speaking, I don\'t also like a sudden event which is not fair to all people. >> CORRECT! On that day, our government is planning to allow us not to pay any tollgate fees when we use the expressway.>> CORRECT! However, where can the Expressway Public Corporation make up for their loss from? >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, how can the Expressway Public Corporation make up for their loss? Of course, it is from taxes paid by hard-working citizens.>> CORRECT! The reason why our government made this kind of decision suddenly is because they don\'t have any outstanding achievements in a period of their regime.  >> The reason why our government made this kind of decision suddenly is because they don\'t have any outstanding achievements in the period of their regime so far. (C2 A PERIOD should be THE PERIOD.) Moreover, in order to divert people\'s attention from various accidents caused by our government, they decided to celebrate our National Liberation Day more especially even if it is not its 50th or 100th anniversary. >> Moreover, in order to divert people\'s attention from various incidents caused by our government, they decided to celebrate our National Liberation Day more especially even if it is not its 50th or 100th anniversary. (C3 ACCIDENTS should be INCIDENTS.) For your reference, we celebrate its 70th anniversary this year. >> CORRECT! >> OR: For your reference, we are going to celebrate the 70th year of our sovereignty this year. Anyway, since they already designated August 14th as a temporary holiday, well, I am going to just enjoy that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Anyway, since they already declared August 14th as a temporary holiday, well, I am just going to enjoy that. When it comes to politics, I am somehow being negative. ^^;;>> CORRECT! Don\'t be affected by that. ^^>> CORRECT! That is all for today and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!