Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A terrific Tuesday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to apologize because I checked your composition late.

I am really sorry.

Anyway, I felt your sadness about your last day of vacation this month.

However, I am glad that you already planned for everything regarding your trip in Bangkok, Thailand.

All are set then! ^^

Well, if you change your mind, you can come here in the Philippines. Hahaha! ^^,

By the way, last weekend was a very busy period since my family and I prepared a lot for my younger sister and younger brother\'s birthday.

My younger sister\'s birthday is on August 16.

While my younger brother\'s birthday is on August 18.

Well, we celebrated their birthdays for two days.

Saturday was the celebration with the family, and Sunday was the party with friends.

It was great, but it also made me exhausted.

That\'s all for my weekend! ^^

Anyhow, happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A good day to you!
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Today is the last of my short vacation.
>> Today is the last day of my short vacation.

I am now in the library and making my composition.
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I am going to go home after an hour and have dinner with my boyfriend.
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How did you spend your last weekend?
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>> OR: How did you spend your time last weekend?

In my case, I have thought about where to go during my vacation in October, and I finally decided to go to Bangkok in Thailand.
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>> BETTER: In my case, I have thought about where to go during my vacation in October, and I finally decided to go to Bangkok, Thaikand.

I already booked my plane tickets and hotel.
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>> OR: I already booked flight tickets and hotel accommodation.

It took two days to look for hot places in Bangkok.
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The reason why I chose this place is that there is the safest place in southeastern countries.
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>> BETTER: The reason why I chose this place is that it is the safest place in southeastern countries.

In addition, there are many customers who have business relationships with us.
>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TI SAY IS: In addition, many of our costumers who have business relationship with us live in Bangkok.

I intend to visit them while I am there.
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Anyway, my time is over in the library and see you very soon!
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[이름]

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