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2015-08-18 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear [Name], Good morning! I am very tired, because I didn't sleep tightly last night due to mosquitoes. Because of the hot weather, I didn't set up a mosquito net, so I was totally exposed to them. I was so annoyed by them and wondering about why they only bit my fingers and toes. When they bite these parts on my body, I feel tingly. In order not to be bitten by them anymore, I set up a mosquito net and went to sleep again. It was almost 2:30 AM. Now, I am a little woozy, so I can't focus on my tasks. Maybe, it is like one of the symptoms of Monday sickness. By the way, I heard a bad news that a bombing attack happened in Bangkok. I already fixed my vacation plan there. Unfortunately, the place where the accident happened is also in my list. I am somehow confused if it is okay for me to keep my schedule in October. Well, all I do is just check the situation. Anyway, that is all for now and see you soon! [이름]

강사 첨삭

Dear [이름],

A wonderful Tuesday to you! ^.^

I am so sorry to know about your situation last night.

Those are really bad mosquitoes.

I hope they won\'t annoy you tonight.

But, wait!

Do you know that we have a similar condition today?
Of course, you don\'t know yet, so I will tell you. Hahaha! ^^

Honestly, I am also groggy today due to my unexpected appointment with my boyfriend.

Yes, what you are thinking is correct.

We got together again last night. Hahaha! ^^,

Though I feel so weak today, I am still happy. Hahaha! ^^.

Anyway, you made me remember the news that I saw this morning.

Well, the bombing was over, so everything will be okay when you visit there.

Don\'t be confused or worried. ^^

That\'s all for now! ^^,

Happy reading! ^^.

See you soon! ^.^

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear [Name],
>> CORRECT!

Good morning!
>> CORRECT!

I am very tired, because I didn\'t sleep tightly last night due to mosquitoes.
>> CORRECT!

Because of the hot weather, I didn\'t set up a mosquito net, so I was totally exposed to them.
>> CORRECT!

I was so annoyed by them and wondering about why they only bit my fingers and toes.
>> CORRECT!

When they bite these parts on my body, I feel tingly.
>> CORRECT!

In order not to be bitten by them anymore, I set up a mosquito net and went to sleep again.
>> CORRECT!

It was almost 2:30 AM.
>> CORRECT!

Now, I am a little woozy, so I can\'t focus on my tasks.
>> CORRECT!

Maybe, it is like one of the symptoms of Monday sickness.
>> CORRECT!

By the way, I heard a bad news that a bombing attack happened in Bangkok.
>> CORRECT!

I already fixed my vacation plan there.
>> CORRECT!

Unfortunately, the place where the accident happened is also in my list.
>> CORRECT!

I am somehow confused if it is okay for me to keep my schedule in October.
>> CORRECT!

>> OR: I am somehow confused and worried if it is okay for me to keep my schedule in October.

Well, all I do is just check the situation.
>> CORRECT!

Anyway, that is all for now and see you soon!
>> CORRECT!

[이름]

>> CORRECT!

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