Composition

Dear [Name], A wonderful Wednesday to you! First of all, I am happy for hearing that you guys got together again. I am really supportive for you and your perfect boyfriend. Even if it is too fast for you to talk about your future, I think there is a big possibility to have a good result in the near future. Hahaha! ^^ Anyway, I felt nice that I could see your happy face in our last class. You are beautiful when you smile. ^^ By the way, I canceled my plan to go to Bangkok because of a public security there. From what I gathered, they haven't arrested a criminal, and the additional bombing happened again, so I am afraid I had better not go there. In addition, someone predicted that this incident is related to a national relationship between Thailand and China. A lot of Chinese will go there to enjoy their long holiday in October, so if the prediction is true, I can't assure that we are perfectly safe there. I might think too much, but in this insecurity, I don't want to stick with my plan. Well, I would have to consider going to another country, including there in the Philippines. Anyway, that is all for now and see you soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. In current society, it is very hard for people to keep healthy due to their busyness. Every day, they are busy to work and study for the bright future. Modern people can't avoid running around in circles every day, and it can cause a vicious circle. In addition, with the development of technology, people don't need to move as much as they did before. Convenience became poison to our bodies. Let's just look back on the old days when we didn't have a public transportation system. At that time, they just walked and walked to get their destination, and these movements exercised their bodies naturally. Now, there are a lot of obstacles to disturb people to work out, such as escalator, elevator and public transportation. In this case, it is impossible to keep our health and fitness unless we are determined to work out. In order not to be regretful in the future, we really should spend at least 10 minutes per day taking care of our health.

Dear [이름],   A wonderful Wednesday to you, too! ^.^ Thank you for the greeting! ^,^   By the way, thank you for making your composition. Your writing made me think a lot. Hahaha! ^^ It is a useful way to know the things that are running in your head. I am so glad I can know them. ^^,   Anyway, changing your plan is really a good thing. You should really think more of your safety than pleasure. Just like what I told you in our class today, chances are just around you. Hahaha! ^^.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear [Name], >> CORRECT!A wonderful Wednesday to you! >> CORRECT! First of all, I am happy for hearing that you guys got together again. >> CORRECT! I am really supportive for you and your perfect boyfriend. >> CORRECT! Even if it is too fast for you to talk about your future, I think there is a big possibility to have a good result in the near future. Hahaha! ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, I felt nice that I could see your happy face in our last class. >> CORRECT! You are beautiful when you smile. ^^ >> CORRECT! By the way, I canceled my plan to go to Bangkok because of a public security there. >> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, I canceled my plan to go to Bangkok because of the announced public security there. From what I gathered, they haven\'t arrested a criminal, and the additional bombing happened again, so I am afraid I had better not go there. >> From what I gathered, they haven\'t arrested the criminal, and an additional bombing happened, so I am afraid I had better not go there. >> OR: From what I got from the news, they haven\'t arrested the person or people who are liable for the incident, and another bombing happened again, so I am afraid to go there. In addition, someone predicted that this incident is related to a national relationship between Thailand and China. >> CORRECT! A lot of Chinese will go there to enjoy their long holiday in October, so if the prediction is true, I can\'t assure that we are perfectly safe there. >> CORRECT! >> OR: A lot of Chinese will go there to enjoy their long holiday in October, so if the prediction is true, I can\'t be sure that we are perfectly safe there. I might think too much, but in this insecurity, I don\'t want to stick with my plan. >> CORRECT! Well, I would have to consider going to another country, including there in the Philippines.>> Well, I would have to consider going to another country, including the Philippines. >> OR: Well, I would have to consider going to another country, included there is the Philippines. Anyway, that is all for now and see you soon!>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my homework. >> CORRECT! In current society, it is very hard for people to keep healthy due to their busyness.>> CORRECT! Every day, they are busy to work and study for the bright future. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Every day, they are busy at work or school for a brighter future. Modern people can\'t avoid running around in circles every day, and it can cause a vicious circle.>> CORRECT! In addition, with the development of technology, people don\'t need to move as much as they did before. >> CORRECT! Convenience became poison to our bodies. >> CORRECT! Let\'s just look back on the old days when we didn\'t have a public transportation system. >> CORRECT! At that time, they just walked and walked to get their destination, and these movements exercised their bodies naturally. >> At that time, they just walked and walked to get to their destination, and these movements exercised their bodies naturally. Now, there are a lot of obstacles to disturb people to work out, such as escalator, elevator and public transportation. >> CORRECT! In this case, it is impossible to keep our health and fitness unless we are determined to work out.>> CORRECT! In order not to be regretful in the future, we really should spend at least 10 minutes per day taking care of our health. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In order not to regret in the future, we really should spend at least 10 minutes in a day taking care of our bodies. >> OR: In order not to regret in the future, we really should spend at least 10 minutes in a day in order to keep our bodies healthy.