Composition

Dear [Name], Good day! It is a gloomy day here, but it is not raining now. Because a lot of gray clouds cover the sunlight, I don't feel hot. According to the weather forecast, it will rain until Friday, but it will drizzle for a short time. Maybe, autumn will approach more when this rain is finished. I can't wait to welcome the wonderful season. ^^ Anyway, have a good day and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. Our young people are getting tired and busy day by day due to their studies and preparation for employment. Compared to old generation, they are harder to enter the society and find nice jobs. When old generation was looking for their jobs, it was very easy for them to get good jobs. At that time, being a public officer was not that popular, even it was considered as a boring job. However, today's young generation is struggling for being a public officer, and even it is like waiting for dead men's shoes. In this hard situation, I really don't know how we can encourage young people to stay healthy. We are already under hard lives, and there is no time for them to keep their health. We have reached the stage where enjoying some free time is extravagant for them. The moment I am saying that, I feel so bitter. I also belong to young generation, so this situation touches my heart more. I hope our economy condition will improve very soon.

Dear [이름],   An excellent Thursday to you! ^.^   I think you like the weather there in your country today. Hahaha! ^^ I can feel that you are really excited to welcome the autumn season. Am I right? Hahaha! ^^, In our case, because of a typhoon, we are experiencing a moody weather now. It is not really good to go outside, because the rain and wind\'s directions are unpredictable. We can never know how we should position our umbrellas in order not to get wet because of the rain. Frankly speaking, I removed my skirt, jacket and shoes because they are wet. I look like I am just at my home now. Hahaha! ^^.   Anyway, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear [Name], >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! It is a gloomy day here, but it is not raining now. >> CORRECT! Because a lot of gray clouds cover the sunlight, I don\'t feel hot. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because a lot of gray clouds cover the sun, I don\'t feel hot. >> OR: A lot of gray clouds cover the sun, so I don\'t feel hot. According to the weather forecast, it will rain until Friday, but it will drizzle for a short time. >> CORRECT! Maybe, autumn will approach more when this rain is finished. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Maybe, autumn will approach faster when this rain is finished. I can\'t wait to welcome the wonderful season. ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, have a good day and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름]>> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my homework. >> CORRECT! Our young people are getting tired and busy day by day due to their studies and preparation for employment. >> CORRECT! Compared to old generation, they are harder to enter the society and find nice jobs. >> C1 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Compared to the old generation, it is harder for them to enter the society and find nice jobs. >> OR: Compared to the old generation, it is more difficult for them to enter the society and find nice jobs. >> OR: Compared to the old generation, they find that it is harder to enter the society and find nice jobs. When old generation was looking for their jobs, it was very easy for them to get good jobs. >> When people who belong to the old generation were looking for their jobs, it was very easy for them to get good jobs. At that time, being a public officer was not that popular, even it was considered as a boring job. >> CORRECT! However, today\'s young generation is struggling for being a public officer, and even it is like waiting for dead men\'s shoes. >> CORRECT! In this hard situation, I really don\'t know how we can encourage young people to stay healthy. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In this difficult period, I don\'t really know how we can encourage young people to stay healthy. We are already under hard lives, and there is no time for them to keep their health.>> CORRECT! >> OR: We are already under difficult times, and there is no time for them to stay healthy. We have reached the stage where enjoying some free time is extravagant for them. >> CORRECT! The moment I am saying that, I feel so bitter. >> CORRECT! I also belong to young generation, so this situation touches my heart more. >> I also belong to the young generation, so this situation touches my heart more. (C2 Since you are talking about a specific generation, THE should be used.) I hope our economy condition will improve very soon. >> CORRECT!