Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear [Name] [이름],
Happy Monday once again! ^.^
Just like what I predicted on my first reply today.
You had a great weekend. Hahaha! ^^
That is really wonderful! ^^,
Well, in my case, I had a great weekend even though there was a typhoon and we didn\'t have electricity.
I had some time with my boyfriend also, but it wasn\'t enough.
I want to be a good girlfriend, so I will be patient for him.
I love him, so I will endure everything. Hahaha! ^^.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you very soon! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
Dear [Name],
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Good morning!
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Here in Korea, it is windy, but it is not raining yet.
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As I heard from the weather forecast, a typhoon is approaching, and it will affect us tomorrow.
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>> OR: As I heard from the weather forecast, a typhoon is approaching our country, and it will affect us tomorrow.
How about there?
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>> OR: How about there in the Philippines?
I guess that the typhoon that affected you last Thursday has already passed away.
>> I guess that the typhoon that affected you last Thursday has already passed your nation.
I hope this typhoon won\'t cause any disasters here.
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By the way, I met one of my female friends last Saturday, and we had a wonderful time all day.
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Even if we had the same pattern to enjoy our time, we still felt happy and pleasant.
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Because of her business, it is very hard of us to meet together often, but we always feel at home when we are together.
>> Because of her business, it is very hard for us to meet each other often, but we always feel at home when we are together.
>> OR: Because of her business, it is very hard for us to be together often, but we always feel at home when we are on each other\'s side.
Indeed, old friends are the best.
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By the way, two mentally handicapped persons live next door, and they are so kind and polite.
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However, sometimes, they are too much. ^^;;
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As an example, because of the hot weather, I usually open my door and hang up curtain to keep my privacy.
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In this case, when they pass my house, they always open my curtain to greet me.
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Whenever they do like that, I feel so embarrassed, but I don\'t know how I can tell them about this situation.
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Is it better for me to tell them that don\'t do like that in a forceful tone directly?
>> Is it better for me to tell them in a forceful tone directly that they shouldn\'t do that?
Or, should I just be patient, since the hot weather will be finished soon?
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I know they are innocent and have no malice in doing that.
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Well, I had better think a good way over to stop them doing that. ^^
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Anyway, how was your weekend?
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Was your boyfriend available to meet you?
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>> OR: Was your boyfriend available to be with you?
I am thinking that this situation is unfair for you.
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However, I don\'t want you to regret this situation. ^^
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>> OR: However, I don\'t want you to regret anything in the end.
You are strong and wise, so you can get over where you are now.
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>> OR: You are strong and wise, so you can find your way out where you are now.
Well, love is the greatest thing. ^^
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See you very soon!
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[이름]
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