Composition

Dear [Name], Good morning! Here in Korea, a typhoon called KONI is affecting us now, so it is windy and raining cats and dogs. The temperature is also lower than yesterday, so I am wearing a long sleeves cardigan. I usually go out to have lunch, but I think I had better not go out today in this situation, because I don't like getting wet. How about there in the Philippines? Is it still raining there? You said that the second typhoon is approaching there, so no doubt you will worry about that. Let's check the weather forecast carefully. By the way, yesterday, when I was having dinner with my boyfriend, a mentally handicapped person opened my curtain and greeted me again. My boyfriend has watched for a chance to warn him not to do like that, and he finally gave the person a warning. However, that guy seemed to ignore my boyfriend's word and just passed. Well, it will be necessary for me not to allow that person to do like that. Sometimes, it is not always right to overlook anything wrong, even if someone is handicapped. Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my composition. In my opinion, the best way of acquiring information is to read books. There is a saying that books are food for the mind. We can maintain our body through having foods, and in the same vein, we should enjoy reading books to grow our knowledge more. However, a lot of people tend to make an excuse that they don't have enough time to read books due to their busyness. It is also true, but if we think about that, we are wasting our time in doing useless things, such as doing games, watching TV and so on. It really depends on people's will to acquire something by reading books. In order not to be behind the times, we should try to keep on reading books at least 10 minutes a day.

Dear [이름],   An awesome Tuesday to you! ^.^ Happy day! ^^   Thank you for the update about your weather there in Korea. I feel a little bad about you not having lunch outside because of the weather. Well, it is also a good thing to change your routine, right?   Anyway, it is good that your boyfriend already somehow reprimanded one of your handicapped neighbors about their behavior. I think they are already thinking about not greeting you on that way. Hahaha! ^^   Anyhow, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear [Name], >> CORRECT! Good morning! >> CORRECT! Here in Korea, a typhoon called KONI is affecting us now, so it is windy and raining cats and dogs.>> CORRECT! >> OR: Here in Korea, a typhoon called Koni is affecting us now, so it is windy and raining cats and dogs. The temperature is also lower than yesterday, so I am wearing a long sleeves cardigan. >> CORRECT! I usually go out to have lunch, but I think I had better not go out today in this situation, because I don\'t like getting wet. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I usually go out to have lunch, but I think I\'d better not go out today in this situation, because I don\'t like getting wet because of the rain. How about there in the Philippines? >> CORRECT! Is it still raining there? >> CORRECT! You said that the second typhoon is approaching there, so no doubt you will worry about that. >> CORRECT! Let\'s check the weather forecast carefully. >> CORRECT! By the way, yesterday, when I was having dinner with my boyfriend, a mentally handicapped person opened my curtain and greeted me again. >> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, yesterday, when I was having dinner with my boyfriend, one of my handicapped neighbors opened my curtain and greeted me again. My boyfriend has watched for a chance to warn him not to do like that, and he finally gave the person a warning. >> CORRECT! However, that guy seemed to ignore my boyfriend\'s word and just passed.>> CORRECT! Well, it will be necessary for me not to allow that person to do like that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, it will be necessary for me not to allow that person from doing that kind of action again. Sometimes, it is not always right to overlook anything wrong, even if someone is handicapped. >> Sometimes, it is not always right to overlook any wring things, even if someone is handicapped. Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my composition. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, the best way of acquiring information is to read books. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my opinion, the best way of acquiring information is from reading books. There is a saying that books are food for the mind.>> CORRECT! We can maintain our body through having foods, and in the same vein, we should enjoy reading books to grow our knowledge more.>> CORRECT! However, a lot of people tend to make an excuse that they don\'t have enough time to read books due to their busyness. >> CORRECT! It is also true, but if we think about that, we are wasting our time in doing useless things, such as doing games, watching TV and so on. >> CORRECT! It really depends on people\'s will to acquire something by reading books. >> CORRECT! In order not to be behind the times, we should try to keep on reading books at least 10 minutes a day. >> CORRECT!