Composition

Dear Teacher Paula, Good morning! It has stopped raining here in Seoul, and I feel nice that I can see a blue sky. By the way, I just called one of my previous colleagues to say hello after a long time of not contacting each other. I wanted to give him a machine fairs ticket, and he is going to come here and have lunch with us. I am glad to see him, and we will have a great lunch time together soon. By the way, my boyfriend proposed me to go to Bangkok together this Korean Thanksgiving Day, including his days off. He said that he can see my mind that I strongly have a craving for going there, so he is considering adapting his schedule for my plan now. However, I already know that it is very hard for him to ask for two days leave at that time of month, because he has to deal with his monthly settlement at the end of every month. I don't want him to be pressed for time and get tired because of me. Suddenly, I really hate the terrorist that bombed. ^^;; That is all for now and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my composition. I think knowledge quiz shows on TV are very interesting and beneficial. Not only they encourage people to acquire more knowledge, but they also provide prize if someone wins the first grade. Here in Korea, there are some kinds of knowledge quiz shows, such as Korean words competition, Korean historic quiz and so on. I also want to attend one of these competitions, but I may not be able to compete with other distinguished competitors for now. Knowledge is accumulated gradually. As an extension of last composition's subject, reading books will be the best way to grow our knowledge.

Dear my Loveable Student [이름],   A cool day to you! ^.^ Happy Wednesday! ^,^   It is good that you are meeting your friends whom you didn\'t have any contact with for a long time.   By the way, your boyfriend\'s proposal is good. I think he won\'t ask you to go to Bangkok with him if he is going to be in some problems. It is better for you to ask those matters to him to make things clear.   Anyway, I agree with your opinion about knowledge quiz shows. We can really gain a lot of information from watching them. We may also know some facts and use them in the future. Here in my country, we also have a lot of knowledge quiz shows. They are opted to challenge people and give prizes to those deserving individuals. I also agree that reading books is the best way to widen our knowledge.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning! >> CORRECT! It has stopped raining here in Seoul, and I feel nice that I can see a blue sky. >> CORRECT! By the way, I just called one of my previous colleagues to say hello after a long time of not contacting each other. >> CORRECT! I wanted to give him a machine fairs ticket, and he is going to come here and have lunch with us. >> I wanted to give him a machine fair ticket, and he is going to come here and have lunch with us. (C1 MACHINE FAIRS TICKET should be MACHINE FAIR TICKET.) I am glad to see him, and we will have a great lunch time together soon. >> CORRECT! By the way, my boyfriend proposed me to go to Bangkok together this Korean Thanksgiving Day, including his days off. >> C2 IT IS BETTER TO SAY: By the way, my boyfriend proposed to me about going to Bangkok together this Korean Thanksgiving Day, including his days off. He said that he can see my mind that I strongly have a craving for going there, so he is considering adapting his schedule for my plan now. >> CORRECT! However, I already know that it is very hard for him to ask for two days leave at that time of month, because he has to deal with his monthly settlement at the end of every month.>> CORRECT! I don\'t want him to be pressed for time and get tired because of me. >> CORRECT! Suddenly, I really hate the terrorist that bombed. ^^;;>> CORRECT! >> OR: Suddenly, I really hate the terrorists who bombed some places there. That is all for now and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my composition. >> CORRECT! I think knowledge quiz shows on TV are very interesting and beneficial. >> CORRECT! Not only they encourage people to acquire more knowledge, but they also provide prize if someone wins the first grade. >> Not only they encourage people to acquire more knowledge, but they also provide a prize if someone wins the first grade. (C3 I think you forgot to use A before PRIZE.) >> OR: Not only they encourage people to acquire more knowledge, but they also provide prizes when someone wins every part. Here in Korea, there are some kinds of knowledge quiz shows, such as Korean words competition, Korean historic quiz and so on. >> Here in Korea, there are some kinds of knowledge quiz shows, such as Korean Words Competition, Korean Historic Quiz and so on. I also want to attend one of these competitions, but I may not be able to compete with other distinguished competitors for now. >> CORRECT! Knowledge is accumulated gradually. >> CORRECT! As an extension of last composition\'s subject, reading books will be the best way to grow our knowledge. >> CORRECT!