Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, A happy Thursday to you! How is the weather there? Here in Seoul, I am experiencing a sense of fall in the air in the morning and at night. I don't use a fan anymore when I sleep. It is my time for me to consider about what I should wear in this season. ^^;; I am so curious about what I wore in the last fall season. Well, it is so annoying for me to choose and buy new clothes. ^^;; When I was in my school days, my teachers taught me that we should be happy that we have clear four seasons a year. However, as I am getting older, I am somehow lazy to adapt this changing seasons. Whenever the season is changed, I have to change my clothes and bedclothes. In addition, the condition of my skin also follows the weather, so it is a little hard for me to care for it. Well, it is no good complaining about this natural phenomenon, so I just have to accept that positively. ^^ Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: Below is my homework. In my opinion, we should be aware of the general issues around us. It is our duty to make our nation better, and at the same time, it is our rights to know about how it is going around us. All things that happen around us are connected to each other closely, so we shouldn't overlook and ignore them even if they are minor things. As an example, let's say our government isn't going to a right track! In this situation, if our citizens don't observe and monitor our government's behavior strictly and just sit back, corruption by people in positions of authority or power will spread without any guilt. We shouldn't forget always that we are in the most import position.

Dear my Student [이름], An energetic and a healthy Monday to us! ^.^ Happy day! ^,^ It is just now that I had enough energy to check your composition. I am so sorry. T.T Anyway, I think if I was in your situation, I would be very happy. Changing clothes and other things every change of season might be annoying, but it would also be fun because of different activities. Hahaha! ^^ I want to try all the leisure activities their in Korea, especially when it is winter. ^^ I want to make a snowman and experience snowball fight. ^^, However, I wouldn\'t buy new clothes every seasonal change. That\'s all! ^^ Happy reading and sorry! See you later! ^^, ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~ P.S.: I agree with your opinion about general issues awareness. You are right that it is our responsibility to observe our government and country. ^^ Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A happy Thursday to you!>> CORRECT! How is the weather there?>> CORRECT! Here in Seoul, I am experiencing a sense of fall in the air in the morning and at night. >> CORRECT! I don\'t use a fan anymore when I sleep. >> CORRECT! It is my time for me to consider about what I should wear in this season. ^^;;>> CORRECT! >> BETTER: For me, it is my time to consider about what I should wear in this season. I am so curious about what I wore in the last fall season.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am so curious about what I wore last fall. Well, it is so annoying for me to choose and buy new clothes. ^^;;>> CORRECT! When I was in my school days, my teachers taught me that we should be happy that we have clear four seasons a year. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: When I was studying, my teachers taught me that we should be happy that we have clear four seasons in a year. However, as I am getting older, I am somehow lazy to adapt this changing seasons. >> CORRECT! Whenever the season is changed, I have to change my clothes and bedclothes. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Whenever the season changes, I have to change everything, especially my clothes and bedding. In addition, the condition of my skin also follows the weather, so it is a little hard for me to care for it. >> CORRECT! Well, it is no good complaining about this natural phenomenon, so I just have to accept that positively. ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my homework. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, we should be aware of the general issues around us. >> CORRECT! It is our duty to make our nation better, and at the same time, it is our rights to know about how it is going around us. >> CORRECT! All things that happen around us are connected to each other closely, so we shouldn\'t overlook and ignore them even if they are minor things. >> CORRECT! As an example, let\'s say our government isn\'t going to a right track! >> CORRECT! In this situation, if our citizens don\'t observe and monitor our government\'s behavior strictly and just sit back, corruption by people in positions of authority or power will spread without any guilt.  >> CORRECT! We shouldn\'t forget always that we are in the most import position. >> We shouldn\'t forget always that we are in the most important position.