Composition

2015-08-31 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear my Teacher Paula, What happened to you? This month, you were absent twice, so I am a little worried about your personnel evaluation in Power English. You don't need to feel sorry for me. No matter how many times you are absent, I can totally understand you. I just hope your absence is related to a good thing. By the way, I guess I will be occupied tomorrow, because our boss just came back here from China and will give a lot of tasks to me tomorrow. Just the thought of that makes me feel exhausted. Taking advantage of today's chance, I am planning to have dinner with my boyfriend outside, but he has not yet replied to me about if he is able to leave from work on time. If he doesn't give a message within 20 minutes, I am going to have dinner alone. I already finished choosing my dinner menu, and it is Vietnamese Rice Noodles. The cafeteria which sells that is near our office and the subway station, so I can go home conveniently after finishing having that. Anyway, that is all for now and see you tomorrow! ^^ [이름] P.S.: I wrote my composition yesterday before I left from my office. ^^;;

강사 첨삭

Dear my Student [이름], An energetic and a healthy Monday again! ^.^ Good day! ^,^ I am totally okay now. I ate Samgyeopsal and [이름]chi Soup last Friday. Those foods are really my medicines. I am really sorry about my unusual excuse for my absence, but that is true. I hope I can remove that. However, I am afraid that it is impossible. Anyway, when you said that you were worried about my personal evaluation in Power English, I got nervous. I don\'t really like having any bad records, but I know it is my fault. I hope to have stronger body and mind. Anyhow, I think Vietnamese Rice Noodles is a delicious dish. I want to try it this weekend. ^^ That\'s all for my reply to your composition! ^^, Happy reading! ^^. See you in class! ^.^ ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~ Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! What happened to you?>> CORRECT! This month, you were absent twice, so I am a little worried about your personnel evaluation in Power English. >> CORRECT! You don\'t need to feel sorry for me. >> CORRECT! No matter how many times you are absent, I can totally understand you. >> CORRECT! I just hope your absence is related to a good thing. >> CORRECT! By the way, I guess I will be occupied tomorrow, because our boss just came back here from China and will give a lot of tasks to me tomorrow. >> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, I guess I will be preoccupied by tomorrow, because our boss just came back here from China and will give a lot of tasks to me after this day. Just the thought of that makes me feel exhausted. >> CORRECT! Taking advantage of today\'s chance, I am planning to have dinner with my boyfriend outside, but he has not yet replied to me about if he is able to leave from work on time. >> Taking advantage of today\'s chance, I am planning to have dinner with my boyfriend outside, but he has not yet replied to me if he is able to leave from work on time. (ABOUT IF should be IF only.) If he doesn\'t give a message within 20 minutes, I am going to have dinner alone. >> CORRECT! I already finished choosing my dinner menu, and it is Vietnamese Rice Noodles. >> CORRECT! The cafeteria which sells that is near our office and the subway station, so I can go home conveniently after finishing having that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: The cafeteria which sells that is near our office and the subway station, so I can go home conveniently after having that. Anyway, that is all for now and see you tomorrow! ^^>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: I wrote my composition yesterday before I left from my office. ^^;; >> CORRECT!

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