Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning! Did you have Samgyeopsal with your friends last Friday after finishing your work? The moment I heard that you feel dizzy when you don't eat something that you have craved for a long time, I somehow felt amazed and worried again. You really should resolve your urge to eat on time in order not to suffer from being dizzy. By the way, I drove out to the suburb with my boyfriend after a long time of not playing together. It took an hour to get our destination where is near North Korea. There is a big clothing shopping market called 'Paju Premium Outlet,' and the prices of them are reasonable. However, we didn't buy anything there and just had Cheonggukjang which is made of soybean paste. After getting home, we watched a reality program called 'Infinite Challenge' that is our favorite. As a dinner menu, we had steamed male blue crabs and raw thread herrings with a red chili-pepper paste with vinegar. At this time of year, they are typical seasonal foods, so we must have them to taste those savor, especially the raw thread herring. There is a saying that a daughter-in-law left home will come back home when she smells grilled thread herrings. It means that the taste of that is heavenly and wonderful. Before this season passes, I am going to enjoy it more. ^^ Anyway, that is all for now and see you tomorrow! [이름] P.S.: Below is my composition. In my opinion, not all internet sources provide reliable information. We can be exposed to a humorous amount of information through internet, and some of them are not proved to be reliable. Because of the immensity of the information, there is a possibility for people to take wrong information and harm themselves. As an example, many people believe blindly some remedies on the web to get over their illness. However, that kind of behavior is so dangerous, and even it will cause people's illness to get severer. Since we can't avoid being exposed to a defenseless state in a flood of information, we should develop our eyes for selecting good information.

Dear my Student [이름], Hahaha! ^.^ An energetic and a healthy Monday for the third time! ^,^ It was so wonderful when I devoured Samgyeopsal and [이름]chi Soup last Friday. It was a relief. Hahaha! ^^ Anyway, I am really sorry about my strange sickness. T.T Anyhow, I like what you did at \'Paju Premium Outlet.\' You had window-shopping. I like window shopping, too, but I get depressed when I see something very special and I can\'t buy it. T.T Well, that\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you very soon! ^^. ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~ Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning! >> CORRECT! Did you have Samgyeopsal with your friends last Friday after finishing your work? >> CORRECT! The moment I heard that you feel dizzy when you don\'t eat something that you have craved for a long time, I somehow felt amazed and worried again. >> CORRECT! You really should resolve your urge to eat on time in order not to suffer from being dizzy. >> CORRECT! By the way, I drove out to the suburb with my boyfriend after a long time of not playing together. >> CORRECT! It took an hour to get our destination where is near North Korea. >> It took an hour to get to our destination where is near North Korea. (PATTERN: get to a destination) There is a big clothing shopping market called \'Paju Premium Outlet,\' and the prices of them are reasonable. >> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: There is a big clothing market called \'Paju Premium Outlet,\' and the prices of the goods there are reasonable. However, we didn\'t buy anything there and just had Cheonggukjang which is made of soybean paste. >> CORRECT! After getting home, we watched a reality program called \'Infinite Challenge\' that is our favorite.>> CORRECT! >> OR: After getting home, we watched a reality program called \'Infinite Challenge\' which is our favorite. As a dinner menu, we had steamed male blue crabs and raw thread herrings with a red chili-pepper paste with vinegar. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: As a dinner menu, we had Steamed Male Blue Crabs and Raw Thread Herrings with a red chili-pepper paste with vinegar. At this time of year, they are typical seasonal foods, so we must have them to taste those savor, especially the raw thread herring.>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: At this time of year, they are typical seasonal foods, so we must have them to savor their taste, especially the Raw Thread Herring. There is a saying that a daughter-in-law left home will come back home when she smells grilled thread herrings. >> CORRECT! >> OR: There is a saying that a daughter-in-law left home will come back home when she smells Grilled Thread Herrings. It means that the taste of that is heavenly and wonderful. >> CORRECT! Before this season passes, I am going to enjoy it more. ^^>> CORRECT! Anyway, that is all for now and see you tomorrow! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my composition. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, not all internet sources provide reliable information. >> CORRECT! We can be exposed to a humorous amount of information through internet, and some of them are not proved to be reliable. >> CORRECT! Because of the immensity of the information, there is a possibility for people to take wrong information and harm themselves. >> CORRECT! As an example, many people believe blindly some remedies on the web to get over their illness. >> CORRECT! However, that kind of behavior is so dangerous, and even it will cause people\'s illness to get severer. >> CORRECT! >> OR: However, that kind of behavior is so dangerous, and even it will cause people\'s illness to get worse. Since we can\'t avoid being exposed to a defenseless state in a flood of information, we should develop our eyes for selecting good information. >> CORRECT!