Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A LIVELY and STUNNING Wednesday! ^.^

Ohhh~~~!!! =P

What you had at your breakfast is really delicious!

I am not saying these words, because the bananas are from my country.

I just know that they are tasty and expensive here in the Philippines, too.

Suddenly, I envy you because of that.

Anyway, it is good that you slept tight last night.

I think the mosquitoes were so annoyed, because they couldn\'t get some blood from you.

They might have been very hungry last night.

They might be hungry until now. Hahaha! ^^

Ohhh~~~!!! ^^

Will your co-workers really have a long weekend?

That is really awesome.

I know that you will have your personal time soon. ^^,

By the way, what do you mean about 70th Second World War Victory?

Is that a good thing to celebrate?

On how I understand it, they will organize something for remembering their part during the Second World War, am I right?

I am really curious about it, so I will do some researches. Hahaha! ^^.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: I think you are right that younger people are more adaptable to changes. I want to say VERY GOOD, because you included an example that will prove your opinion. You did a good job! ^.^ I am so excited to read your new compositions. ^^,

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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I am eating bananas imported from your country with a cup of coffee as my breakfast in my office.
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>> OR: I am eating imported bananas, that are from your country, with a cup of coffee as my breakfast in my office.

They are so delicious. ^^
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Because of imported goods, it is a little expensive, but it deserves buying.
>> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: Because they are imported goods, they is a little expensive, but they deserve to be bought. 

By the way, today is the last day this week for our Chinese coworkers to work.
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>> OR: By the way, today is the last day this week for our Chinese co-workers to work.

They will have a long holiday and start working next Monday.
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It is to celebrate the 70th anniversary of the Second World War victory.
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>> OR: It is to commemorate the Second World War victory that they had for the 70th time.

Our President was also invited to the celebration, so she left for China this morning.
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I think China seems to take advantage of this chance and intend to increase their reputation as G2.
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No matter what they are thinking, having a rest is a good news for Chinese and me. ^^
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I also can have some rest for the rest of two days this week.
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Anyway, yesterday, I slept with socks and thin gloves on in order not to be bitten by mosquitoes.
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It was a good way, because I could have a tight sleep without their obstruction.
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Maybe, they really wanted to bite me, but they might have been unable to do that because of my socks and gloves.
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That was so useful. ^^
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Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: Below is my composition today.
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In my opinion, younger people are more adaptable to changes.
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The more people are young, the more they can learn foreign languages easily.
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>> BETTER: The more a person is young, the more he or she can learn foreign language easily.

In addition, young people are faster to understand something new than older people.
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As a real example, I have a female friend who got married with Japanese, and they live in China.
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>> OR: As a matter of fact, I have a female friend who got married with a Japanese, and they live in China.

They have two children, and the first child of them can speak 3 languages at the same time.
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>> BETTER: They have two children, and their first child can speak 3 languages at the same time.

She is only 3 years old.
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If she starts to learn English after a few years, she will be able to speak 4 languages.
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I think it proves that young people\'s brains are open to adapting new things and changes.
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>> OR: I think it proves that young people\'s brains are open to new things and changes.

In conclusion, if we want to make our children be more intelligent and experienced, it is a good way to give them many changes that they fully experience various situations in many fields.

>> In conclusion, if we want to make our children be more intelligent and experienced, it is a good way to give them many changes so that they can fully experience various situations in many fields. (You forgot to put SO before THAT.)