Composition
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Dear my Student [이름],
A winsome Friday to us! ^.^
T.G.I.F.~~~!!! ^,^
To start, I will answer your question. ^^
I have some few plans this weekend.
Starting tonight, I will be with Teacher Chloe and her friend Karen to have some food and drinks outside.
We might go to a bar.
Tomorrow morning, I will go to a place called Winaca Eco Cultural Village and Forest Homes with Teacher Venus and Teacher Julie.
We might go there with other people. Hahaha! ^^,
I want to try the different activities there.
Tomorrow evening, I will meet two of my long time friends.
They are Maan and Nica.
Nica and I will stay over night at Maan\'s place.
We will have some food and chat there.
On Sunday early morning, the three of us will go jogging.
Those are my appointments for this coming weekend. ^^.
By the way, I also want to watch \'Assassination,\' because I like the lead female star there.
Anyway, enjoy watching the movie and your time with your friends.
Ohhh! ^^
Wait! ^^,
Thank you for continuing our discussion about Korea and Corea! ^^.
It is very clear to me now.
Anyway, I like Corea more. Hahaha! ^^
The spelling is very cute and unique.
That\'s all for now! ^^
Happy reading! ^^,
See you on Monday! ^^.
... Teacher Paula ... ^.~
P.S.: \'Coryeo\' is where Queen Seondeok came from, right? ^^
Dear my Teacher Paula,
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A wonderful Friday to you! ^^
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Do you have a plan for this coming weekend?
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In my case, I am going to see a movie with two of my female friends tomorrow.
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We already chose what we will see, and it is a Korean movie called \'Assassination.\'
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The history of it is related with our dark history, so maybe, I will resent Japan for doing barbarities during watching it.
>> The history of it is related to our dark history, so maybe, I will resent Japan for doing barbarities while watching it. (C1 PATTERN: related to C2 In your sentence, it is better to use WHILE instead of DURING.)
By the way, as an extension of yesterday\'s class, I want to explain more about the provenance of Korean and Corea.
>> By the way, as an extension of yesterday\'s class, I want to explain more about the provenance of Korea and Corea. (C3 KOREAN should be KOREA, right?)
Our country\'s English name was Corea in the middle of the 13th century, and it came from our country\'s old name \'Coryeo.\'
>> Our country\'s English name was Corea in the middle of the 13th century, and it came from our country\'s old name \'Coryeo.\'
However, starting from the 18th century, our country\'s English name changed to Korea, and the name spelled Korea was agreed by rules internationally.
>> However, starting from the 18th century, our country\'s English name changed to Korea, and the name spelled K-O-R-E-A was agreed by rules internationally. (C4 The second KOREA should be K-O-R-E-A.)
>> OR: However, starting from the 18th century, our country\'s English name changed into Korea, and the name spelled K-O-R-E-A was agreed by rules internationally.
Someone said Japan changed the name from Corea to Korea when we were their colony, because they couldn\'t allow the situation that \'C\' of Corea is ahead of \'J\' of Japan in alphabetical order.
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However, another one said that there are not enough reasons to declare that the opinion is right, because Corea and Korea had been used together before we were under Japanese colonial rule.
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In addition, they contend that it may be okay to write our country name as both Corea and Korea linguistically.
>> In addition, they contend that it may be okay to write our country\'s name as both Corea and Korea linguistically. (C5 You forgot to put \'S after COUNTRY.)
Not that long ago, we didn\'t pay our attention to what is correct.
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However, some of netizens and football fans started insisting to use Corea, and from that time, this issue has begun becoming a major issue.
>> C6 I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY WANT TO SAY IS: However, some of netizens and football fans started insisting to use Corea, and from that time, this issue as a major issue has begun.
Many people think that it is necessary to change the name to Corea, but it is a cautious and difficult issue, so we should consider it sincerely.
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>> OR: Many people think that it is necessary to change the name into Corea, but it is a cautious and difficult issue, so we should consider it sincerely.
In this case, we also need to discuss about this matter with North Korea before changing the name of our country.
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Well, somehow, it is a profound and difficult issue that we can\'t approach easily.
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>> OR: Well, it is somehow a profound and difficult issue that we can\'t deal with easily.
Anyway, that is all for now and see you very soon!
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Have a nice day! ^^
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[이름]
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