Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A majestic Monday to us! ^.^

Happy day! ^,^

I was a little busy last weekend.

I was a little busy only, because my Sunday morning jogging appointment with two of my female friends was postponed.

Maan needed to see her mother-in-law last Saturday, and she thought she would be with her husband\'s mother until yesterday.

Therefore, she put our appointment off.

We will go jogging next Sunday. Hahaha! ^^

Well, that\'s not bad! ^^,

I still met Maan last Sunday.

We invited Nica to join us, but she needed to go back to her hometown on that day, so we felt like it was a shame not to be with her.

Anyway, we still enjoyed our time together.

We cooked some foods to match to our drink. Hahaha! ^^

Yes, Maan and I had some alcoholic beverage yesterday, and because of that, I didn\'t go home.

I slept at Maan\'s place. Hahaha! ^^,

By the way, thank you for the composition that you made! ^^.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: Thanks for answering my question about Queen Seondeok and Coryeo! ^.^

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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I just saw your last weekend\'s schedule, and you might have been very busy and tried to manage a series of hectic schedule.
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I really admire you. ^^
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In my case, I met two of my female friends and talk to each other until 11 PM after seeing a movie on Saturday.
>> In my case, I met two of my female friends, and we talked to each other until 11 PM after seeing a movie on Saturday. (C1 You forgot to put a COMMA after FRIENDS. There should be WE before TALKED, because you can\'t say, \"I TALKED TO EACH OTHER.\")

>> BETTER: In my case, I met two of my female friends, and we talked to each other until 11 PM after seeing a movie last Saturday.

They all have a husband and children, so we couldn\'t play outside longer than that time.
>> C2 I THINK WHAT YOU REALLY WANT TO SAY IS: They both have husbands and children, so we couldn\'t play outside longer than we used to do when we were single at that time.

Yesterday, I was just at home to do household chores.
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Household chores never end. --;;
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After doing that, I went for a walk with my boyfriend, and we discussed about how we will spend this coming Chuseok.
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>> BETTER: After doing that, I went for a walk with my boyfriend, and we discussed about how we will spend our time wonderfully this coming Chuseok.

Every Chuseok, he always goes to Busan to meet his family, but this time, he decided to stay with me and go for a vacation.
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>> OR: Every Chuseok, he always goes to Busan to meet his family, but this time, he decided to be with me and go for a vacation.

We have 4 days holiday, so we can go where we want.
>> We have 4 days holiday, so we can go to places where we want to go. (C3 To complete your sentence, write TO PLACES after GO and TO GO after WANT. To understand more, surf on the web about RELATIVE PRONOUNS.)

>> OR: We have 4-day holiday, so we can go to places where we want to out time together.

However, we would face a traffic jam whenever we go because of our traditional holiday.
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>> BETTER: However, we would face a traffic jam whenever we go because of our national holiday.

We can\'t spoil our precious holiday by a terrible traffic jam, so we had better think our plan over.
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By the way, the weather here is already cool in the fall, and even it is a little cold in the morning and at night.
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>> OR: By the way, the weather here is already cool, because it is already fall, and even it is a little cold in the morning and at night.

Now, my feet are a little cold.
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Well, it is time to take my long sleeves clothes and long trousers out.
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That is all for today and see you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: I am so glad to hear that you really like our movie star \'Ji-hyun Jun.\'
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I also like her acting and good appearance.
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By the way, for your reference, Queen Seondeok was the ruler of the Silla Dynasty in the 7th century, not Coryeo. ^^

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