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Dear my Student [이름],

A magnificent Tuesday to us! ^.^

I am happy that you are welcoming the Autumn season with joy and positivism. ^^

By the way, may I just give my opinion about the fortune-telling activity that you and your boyfriend played yesterday.

I think that can serve as your guide, but you should also follow your heart, especially your feeling or instinct.

Well, I certainly agree that it is an interesting game.

Anyway, let\'s talk about your issue about you and your boyfriend being childish at the time you played the game.

I think it is a very normal thing.

Being childish sometimes is good, because it tells you that you still have a kid inside you, and you are still young at heart.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later, alligator! Hahaha! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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Autumn is officially here, and I am glad to meet this wonderful season.
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By the way, I am still considering if I have to go to Bangkok, and I and my boyfriend told my fortune with some paper balls with entertainment yesterday.
>> IT IS BETTER TO SAY: By the way, I am still considering whether to go to Bangkok, and my boyfriend and I had a fortune-telling session with some paper balls with entertainment yesterday. (C1 PATTERN: consider whether)

>> OR: By the way, I am still considering going to Bangkok, and my boyfriend and I had a fortune-telling session with some paper balls with entertainment yesterday.

We wrote different words separately on the paper balls, and I picked one after closing eyes.
>> We wrote different words separately on the paper balls, and I picked one after closing my eyes. (C2 There should be MY before EYES.)

>> OR: We wrote different words separately on those paper balls, and I picked one after closing my eyes.

There were 6 paper balls in a bowl, and the written words on them would show my near future\'s fortune.
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I picked one of them while I was thinking of going to Bangkok, and the word that was written on that paper ball was \'VERY GOOD.\'
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I usually don\'t trust this result of fortune-telling, but I somehow feel pleasant. Hahaha!
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Then, it was my boyfriend turn next.
>> Then, it was my boyfriend\'s turn. (C3 You forgot to put \'S after BOYFRIEND, and it is better if NEXT is removed.)

>> OR: Then, next was my boyfriend\'s turn.

These days, my boyfriend\'s university senior has suggested a good position in another company to him, and he is now considering if he goes there.
>> These days, my boyfriend\'s university senior has suggested a good position in another company to him, and he is now considering going there. (C4 PATTERN: consider V-ing)

The company will give a high salary, and even it will be US$ 2000 higher than his current monthly salary.
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Of course, a lot of stresses and frequent overtime will be proportional to the high salary.
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Because of those reasons, he hasn\'t made a decision about changing jobs.
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>> OR: Because of those reasons, he hasn\'t made a decision about changing his job.

We also told his fortune with the paper balls, and the result was \'MIDDLE GOOD.\'
>> C5 I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: We also saw his fortune using the paper balls, and the result was \'MIDDLE GOOD.\'

>> OR: The paper balls also showed his fortune, and the result was \'MIDDLE GOOD.\'

>> OR: We were told about his fortune using the paper balls, and the result was \'MIDDLE GOOD.\'

Now, looking back on our yesterday\'s actions, we were somehow being very childish, but it was an interesting time for us. ^^
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That is all for now and see you very soon!
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