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Dear my Student [이름],

An enjoyable day to you! ^.^

I am so glad that you are enjoying the present season that you have in your country.

However, I am a little bit sad for your co-worker.

I hope he finds a better job soon. ^^

By the way, I would like to commend you for watching \'The Lion King\' which is truly a good help for your further improvement in English.

I think English animations can help you more in mastering the English language.

While you are watching, you can also enjoy and go back to the times when you were a kid. Hahaha! ^^

Be childish often! ^^,

Remember, younger people learn faster than older people.

Anyway, thank you for giving me more information about fortune-telling in your country.

I was so shocked when I read about date of birth.

Can they really fix that?

I think that is really impossible, and it seems like they are violating the law of life that God made.

Well, that\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you very soon! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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It is windy today, but it is so sunny.
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I like this high sky in this season.
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By the way, one of my colleagues will leave our company this Friday because of his business performance.
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>> OR: By the way, one of my colleagues will leave our company this Friday because of his work performance.

The business performance is not related to his individual ability, so I feel somehow bitter about this unavoidable situation.
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I am sure he will look for a better job than he has now, and good luck to him.
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>> BETTER: I am sure he can look for a better job than he has now, and good luck to him.

By the way, today, I downloaded a movie titled \'The Lion King\' to study English.
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Someone said that that animation is easy to listen and helps us improve our English listening skill.
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Well, just like what you said, watching English movies or soup operas will help for mastering foreign languages.
>> Well, just like what you said, watching English movies or soap operas will help for mastering foreign languages. (C1 SOUP OPERAS should be SOAP OPERAS.)

Looking back on my school days, I also studied Chinese language through news and dramas.
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Indeed, mastering foreign languages really depends on how often we can see or hear them.
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Anyway, as an extension of our last class, there are still a lot of people to seek fortuneteller\'s advice whenever they face some crucial situations.
>> Anyway, as an extension of our last class, there are still a lot of people who seek fortuneteller\'s advice whenever they face some crucial situations. (C2 TO  should be WHO.)

For example, before allowing their offspring to marry someone, they go to a fortune-teller to ask about their marital compatibility.
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If the result is not good, some couples decide to break up.
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In addition, some of people want the fortuneteller to fix their babies\' date of birth.
>> In addition, some people want a fortuneteller to fix their babies\' date of birth. (C3 THE can\'t be used before FORTUNETELLER since you are giving a general thought, so it should be A.)

Our country is still based on Confucianism, so many people still believe blindly in the worship of souls or spirits.
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That is why many people are easily affected by fortunetellers who serve God.
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In my case, I don\'t believe that there are souls or spirits around me, but somehow, I also feel uncomfortable when I don\'t follow some myths or fortuneteller\'s prediction.
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Somehow, this situation seems to show human frailty.
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Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon!
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[이름]

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