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2015-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Paula

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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning! T.G.I.F. It is indeed a happy Friday. Do you have some plans for this coming weekend? How about the weather there these days? Here in Korea, it is suitable to go out to play and do laundry. The weather forecast said it will be a gloomy day tomorrow, but the precipitation won't be heavy. In that case, I have to postpone my plan of doing laundry until Sunday. Because of my household chores, I must be occupied at home at the least one day a weekend. If I don't do household chores, I might be unable to breathe due to dust in the room. Moreover, I might have nothing to wear next week when I go to work. That is the most uncomfortable thing when I live alone. Somehow, you are blessed. ^^ You should enjoy that to the fullest before getting married in the future. ^^:; By the way, I am going to look for a new house tomorrow. It is just to look into real estate prices of other places. Well, I guess I somehow will be disappointed at the high prices of houses. Well, good luck to me. *^^* That is all for today, and see you very soon! [이름] P.S.: I don't understand the meaning of 'hospitality jobs' exactly. Does it mean that someone greets or welcomes towards guests who have a business relationship with him or her company, and it is to get achievements in relation to his or her work performance?

강사 첨삭

Dear my Student [이름],   A glorious and happy Friday to us! ^.^   Thank God It\'s Friday~~~!!! ^,^   By the way, I don\'t know my plans yet this coming weekend. I am so lazy to think. Hahaha! ^^ Today is Friday, but I feel a little gloomy. Frankly speaking, I want to cry. Don\'t get affected by me. I am okay, and everything will be alright for me and for you.   Anyway, I hope I can have my own place. I also want to wash my own clothes, clean my place and just rest after those chores. I want to live alone before I tie the knot. I want to take care of myself first before taking care of my future husband and kids.   Ohhh~~~!!! Good luck in looking for your new place that is near your workplace! ^^ Hahaha! ^^,   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later, alligator! ^^. Hahaha! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: Your understanding toward the question is correct. ^^     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning! >> CORRECT! T.G.I.F.>> CORRECT! It is indeed a happy Friday.>> CORRECT! Do you have some plans for this coming weekend? >> CORRECT! How about the weather there these days?>> CORRECT! Here in Korea, it is suitable to go out to play and do laundry. >> Here in Korea, it is suitable to go out to play and do the laundry. (C1 REMEMBER: do laundry = do the washing for other people to earn money ... do the laundry = do the washing for myself and/or my family, a thing that I regularly do) The weather forecast said it will be a gloomy day tomorrow, but the precipitation won\'t be heavy. >> CORRECT! In that case, I have to postpone my plan of doing laundry until Sunday. >> In that case, I have to postpone my plan of doing the laundry until Sunday. (C2 See C1.) Because of my household chores, I must be occupied at home at the least one day a weekend. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Because of my household chores, I must be occupied at home at the least one day every weekend. If I don\'t do household chores, I might be unable to breathe due to dust in the room.>> CORRECT! Moreover, I might have nothing to wear next week when I go to work. >> CORRECT! That is the most uncomfortable thing when I live alone. >> CORRECT! Somehow, you are blessed. ^^ >> CORRECT! You should enjoy that to the fullest before getting married in the future. ^^:;>> CORRECT! By the way, I am going to look for a new house tomorrow.>> CORRECT! It is just to look into real estate prices of other places. >> CORRECT! Well, I guess I somehow will be disappointed at the high prices of houses. >> CORRECT! Well, good luck to me. *^^*>> CORRECT! >> OR: In that case, good luck to me. That is all for today, and see you very soon!>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT! P.S.: I don\'t understand the meaning of \'hospitality jobs\' exactly. >> CORRECT! Does it mean that someone greets or welcomes towards guests who have a business relationship with him or her company, and it is to get achievements in relation to his or her work performance? >> CORRECT!

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