Composition

Dear my Student [이름],

A delightful day to you! ^.^

Happy Monday and good afternoon! ^,^

First of all, thank you for telling me the reason of your absence last Friday. ^^

I thought you had a date with your boyfriend. Hahaha! ^^,

Anyhow, I hope you see what you are looking for! ^^.

By the way, my weekend was great, but I was a little bad.

It was great, because I had some time with my friends for overnight and jogging.

I was bad, because I met Jong Soo last night.

That\'s all for now! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you later! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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I want to tell you the reason why I was absent last Friday.
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I was looking for my new house on the web, and I found a good house.
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>> OR: I was looking for a new house on the web, and I found a good one.

The price was reasonable, and the location was near my office.
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To see the house in person, I couldn\'t avoid being absent.
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However, when I saw that house with my eyes, I was disappointed with the real housing environment.
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It was not the same with what I saw in the internet.
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I already knew that pictures of houses for rent in the internet are not the same with the real houses, but the house that I saw last Friday was so

different with the pictures.
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Well, I would have to look for others houses more in person.
>> Well, I would have to look for other houses more in person. (C1 OTHERS HOUSES is wrong. It should be OTHER HOUSES.)

I haven\'t decided but, I might put our class on hold until I find a new house.
>> I haven\'t decided, but I might put ourclass on hold until I find a new house. (C2 The COMMA should be before BUT.)

I will let you know in advance if I make a decision.
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By the way, what did you do last weekend?
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In my case, of course, I was looking for my new house and arranged my stuffs.
>> In my case, of course, I looked for my new house and arranged my stuffs. (C3 The verbs should be in PasT Simple Tense because of LAST WEEKEND.)

I am about to move out, so I need to pick out goods to throw away.
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There were a lot of clothes that I don\'t wear, so I discarded them resolutely.
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Moreover, many people will go to my place and see if it is good to live.
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That is way I need to clean my room more than ever before.
>> That is why I needed to clean my room more than ever before.

That was my Saturday\'s story, and I saw 3 movies and 2 soap operas on Sunday at home.
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That was a peaceful and relaxing time for me.
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Anyway, that is all for today, and see you very soon!
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[이름]

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