Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good afternoon! I just got back to my office after seeing some new houses during my lunch time. That place is near my office, so I stopped by there after having lunch. However, I didn't like the real location and surroundings there, so I felt a little disappointed. It is so hard to look for a good house. Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! ^^ [이름] P.S.: Below is my composition. In my case, I don't have many chances to meet my family members. I am the second child in my family, and I have one older sister who already got married. She has her own family, so for her, her own family is more important. In addition, I am in Seoul, but they live in Busan, so it is a little hard for us to meet each other. I work, and my mother also works too. In that situation, I can’t time my rest day to coincide with my family. I am somehow regretful that my mother, older sister and I have never gone on a trip together. I am planning to go to Bangkok at the early of October, and I asked my mother to go there with me. However, she said she has to attend her nephew's wedding and deal with other important things. Moreover, I am planning to move out to another place, so I might have to be occupied to look for a new house during that period. I would better cancel my travel plan in this situation. Well, I find it hard to live in Seoul. ^^;;

Dear my Student [이름],   A terrific Tuesday to us! ^.^   Thank you for telling me about your day, including your feelings toward your experience today. ^^ However, I am a little sad knowing that you haven\'t found a new place that is near your workplace. Looking for a new home is really difficult and exhausting. Well, that is just a challenge that you need to face. After that, you will feel fantastic. I have a feeling that you can find for your new home very soon. ^^,   Anyway, I hope you can arrange your time to meet your family often. ^^.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below for your writing improvement. Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT!Good afternoon! >> CORRECT! I just got back to my office after seeing some new houses during my lunch time. >> CORRECT! That place is near my office, so I stopped by there after having lunch. >> CORRECT! However, I didn\'t like the real location and surroundings there, so I felt a little disappointed. >> CORRECT! It is so hard to look for a good house. >> CORRECT! Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! ^^>> CORRECT! [이름]>> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my composition. >> CORRECT! In my case, I don\'t have many chances to meet my family members. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I don\'t have many chances to meet the members of my family. I am the second child in my family, and I have one older sister who already got married.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I am the second child in my family, and I have an older sister who already got married. She has her own family, so for her, her own family is more important.>> CORRECT! In addition, I am in Seoul, but they live in Busan, so it is a little hard for us to meet each other. >> CORRECT! I work, and my mother also works too. >> I work, and my mother works too. >> OR: I work and also my mother. >> OR: I work and my mother also. >> OR: I work and so does my mother. 1. Don\'t use ALSO and TOO in one sentence. In that situation, I can’t time my rest day to coincide with my family. >> CORRECT! I am somehow regretful that my mother, older sister and I have never gone on a trip together. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I somehow regret that my mother, older sister and I have never gone on a trip together. I am planning to go to Bangkok at the early of October, and I asked my mother to go there with me. >> CORRECT! However, she said she has to attend her nephew\'s wedding and deal with other important things.>> CORRECT! Moreover, I am planning to move out to another place, so I might have to be occupied to look for a new house during that period. >> Moreover, I am planning to move out to another place, so I might be occupied to look for a new house during that period. 2. It is not possible to use HAVE TO together with another modal verb. It is a semi-modal verb. I would better cancel my travel plan in this situation. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It would be better for me to cancel my travel plan in this situation. Well, I find it hard to live in Seoul. ^^;; >> CORRECT!