Composition

Dear my Teacher Paula, Good morning! When I left from my home this morning, I found that the elevator in our building was out of order. It is a common situation to me, so I wasn't surprised at this happening. I somehow felt reassured that I wasn't in the elevator when the elevator was broken. Let's say I am stuck at the elevator due to a mechanical problem. Just the thought of the situation makes me scared. I sometimes imagine that what if I want to go to the toilet urgently, when I am stuck at the elevator. It is not a whimsical imagination. It is possible to happen to me, because I go to the 1st floor to go to the toilet. Wow, it is too terrible. Hahaha! By the way, since this morning, our boss has kept asking me many questions about the task that our previous coworker did before. Even he got annoyed at me. I am so feeling down because of this situation. If he is not confident to deal with the task, he should look for a new staff. He is being so selfish, and I am being stressed for that. Well, I need to practice mind-control to make me relaxed. ^^;; Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! P.S.: Below is my composition today. In my case, I rarely go to Busan to meet the members of my family. I seem not to share my time with my family. It is totally my fault. I go to Busan at most twice a year. Since our mother already quit her job, I can have more chances to visit her than ever. Or she can come here and travel in Seoul. In that case, I will be a guide for her.

Dear my Student [이름],   A winsome Wednesday! ^.^   Why were you late in our class today?   By the way, if I am stuck in the elevator, and I am in need to answer the call of nature, I will just break that conveyer. Hahaha! ^^ Frankly speaking, I can\'t imagine myself to be in that situation. I don\'t want to experience it.   Anyway, I think you are right about what your boss should do. I think he can\'t really handle the tasks that your ex-co-worker usually does for your company. Your boss needs to employ someone for that or just ask your ex-co-worker to go back there. I hope he just stops annoying you about tasks that are not related to your job.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you tomorrow! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~   P.S.: I miss you. T.T     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good morning!>> CORRECT! When I left from my home this morning, I found that the elevator in our building was out of order. >> CORRECT! It is a common situation to me, so I wasn\'t surprised at this happening. >> CORRECT! I somehow felt reassured that I wasn\'t in the elevator when the elevator was broken. >> CORRECT! Let\'s say I am stuck at the elevator due to a mechanical problem.>> Let\'s say I am stuck in the elevator due to a mechanical problem. 1. It is better to say IN THE ELEVATOR to state INSIDE. Just the thought of the situation makes me scared. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Just the thought of the situation gives me chill. I sometimes imagine that what if I want to go to the toilet urgently, when I am stuck at the elevator.>> I sometimes imagine that what if I want to go to the toilet urgently, and then I am stuck at the elevator, what will I do? >> OR: I sometimes imagine of going to the toilet urgently and being stuck at the elevator after. What will I do? 2. I think your sentence is not yet complete. It is not a whimsical imagination. >> CORRECT! It is possible to happen to me, because I go to the 1st floor to go to the toilet. >> CORRECT! Wow, it is too terrible. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! By the way, since this morning, our boss has kept asking me many questions about the task that our previous coworker did before. >> CORRECT! Even he got annoyed at me. >> CORRECT! I am so feeling down because of this situation. >> CORRECT! If he is not confident to deal with the task, he should look for a new staff. >> CORRECT! >> OR: If he is not confident to deal with the tasks, he should look for a new staff. He is being so selfish, and I am being stressed for that. >> CORRECT! Well, I need to practice mind-control to make me relaxed. ^^;; >> Well, I need to practice mind-control to make myself relaxed. 3. ME should be MYSELF. Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! P.S.: Below is my composition today. >> CORRECT! In my case, I rarely go to Busan to meet the members of my family. >> CORRECT! >> OR: In my case, I rarely go to Busan to meet my family. >> OR: In my case, I rarely go to Busan to meet my older sister and mother. I seem not to share my time with my family. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I seem not to share my time with them. It is totally my fault. >> CORRECT! I go to Busan at most twice a year. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I go to Busan twice a year at most. Since our mother already quit her job, I can have more chances to visit her than ever.>> CORRECT! Or she can come here and travel in Seoul.>> Or, she can come here and travel in Seoul. 4. There should be a COMMA after OR.   >> OR: Since our mother already quit her job, I can have more chance to visit her than ever, or she can come here and travel in Seoul.   In that case, I will be a guide for her. >> CORRECT!