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Dear my Teacher Paula, A good day to you! I think you already knew the reason why I was absent yesterday. Yes, I went to see a new house that I found in the internet. It was a form of direct transaction with a landlord, not through licensed real estate agent. If I find a good house and make a real estate contract with a landlord directly, I can save my real estate agent's commission. It has a high risk, but it will be okay if I am cautious and check all conditions meticulously. When it comes to yesterday's house, I was disappointed totally, because the house belongs to a corporation. In that case, I can't take out a Deposit Guarantee Insurance to keep my deposit safe. To have a good house, I am considering paying 3 times more amount than my current rental deposit. That is why I could not help to give up the good house. I have to consider a lot of things, so I somehow have a headache. On the other hand, I am considering extending my rental contract two more years. I predict that the price of house will go down in 2 years, and I can get a chip and good house by then, even I might be able to buy a house with a reasonable price. I am not sure if that situation will really happen in the near future, but if I can bear this bad condition only for two years, I have a feeling that I will have a large range of chances to pick a good house. All things depend on my decision. I would have to weight up the pros and cons of two situations well. ^^ Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! [이름]

Dear my Student [이름],   A Thrilling Thursday to us! ^.^   Well, you are right that I already knew why you were absent yesterday, but I was not really sure at that time. Now, that you already informed me about that, everything is clear. Hahaha! ^^   Anyway, I want to give you some good pieces of advice, but I can\'t think of anything. What I just know and think is that it is better for you to give yourself one week more to look for a house near your workplace. After that one week and still new and good place for you to move, you can weight things up. If I were you, I would extend my contract, so after two years, I could buy or rent a good house. You are right! It all depends on your decision. ^^,   That\'s all! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, See you later! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A good day to you! >> CORRECT! I think you already knew the reason why I was absent yesterday. >> CORRECT! Yes, I went to see a new house that I found in the internet. >> Yes, I went to see a new house that I found on the internet. 1. It is better to use ON THE INTERNET, because you are relating it to a content or information that you found. It was a form of direct transaction with a landlord, not through licensed real estate agent. >> CORRECT! If I find a good house and make a real estate contract with a landlord directly, I can save my real estate agent\'s commission. >> If I find a good house and make a real estate contract with a landlord directly, I can save my money, because I don\'t need to pay for a real estate agent\'s commission. 2. I CAN SAVE MY REAL ESTATE AGENT\'S COMMISSION means you can keep the money, but it is still for a real estate agent\'s commission. It has a high risk, but it will be okay if I am cautious and check all conditions meticulously. >> CORRECT! When it comes to yesterday\'s house, I was disappointed totally, because the house belongs to a corporation. >> CORRECT! In that case, I can\'t take out a Deposit Guarantee Insurance to keep my deposit safe. >> CORRECT! To have a good house, I am considering paying 3 times more amount than my current rental deposit. >> CORRECT! That is why I could not help to give up the good house. >> CORRECT! I have to consider a lot of things, so I somehow have a headache. >> CORRECT! On the other hand, I am considering extending my rental contract two more years. >> CORRECT! I predict that the price of house will go down in 2 years, and I can get a chip and good house by then, even I might be able to buy a house with a reasonable price. >> I predict that the prices of houses will go down in 2 years, and I can get a cheap and good house by then, even I might be able to buy a house with a reasonable price. 3. When you generalize things, it is better to use PLURAL SUBJECTS, so THE PRICE OF HOUSE should be THE PRICES OF HOUSES. 4. CHIP should be CHEAP. I am not sure if that situation will really happen in the near future, but if I can bear this bad condition only for two years, I have a feeling that I will have a large range of chances to pick a good house. >> CORRECT! All things depend on my decision. >> CORRECT! I would have to weight up the pros and cons of two situations well. ^^>> I would have to weight up the pros and cons of the two situations well. 5. Since we both already know those situations, writing THE TWO SITUATIONS is correct. Anyway, that is all for today and see you very soon! >> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!