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Dear my Teacher Paula, A good day to you! I am occupied with looking for a new house, so I can't concentrate on my task. I am looking for a house that I can only pay some deposit without a monthly rental fee, but because of a low interest rate, many landlords tend to rent their houses out as a monthly rental way. Your opinion is right. I should not have decided to leave my current place. You may think that I can cancel my decision and extend my contract. Unfortunately, my house was already rented to another new tenant. I felt nervous when I heard that this news. I have to move out until 19-October, so I am available to look for a new house only for one month. Suddenly, my mind went blank. Hahaha! What I think, I become. It is time for me to keep this famous saying. ^^ That is all for today and see you very soon! [이름]

Dear my Student [이름],   A fabulous Friday to us! ^.^   I hope you can find for a new house. It will be a better one. ^^   Anyway, sorry for the short reply. Frankly speaking, I am dizzy now. I have a headache. I am really sorry. T.T   That\'s all! ^^ Have a happy reading still! ^^, See you on Monday! ^^.   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! A good day to you! >> CORRECT! I am occupied with looking for a new house, so I can\'t concentrate on my task. >> CORRECT! I am looking for a house that I can only pay some deposit without a monthly rental fee, but because of a low interest rate, many landlords tend to rent their houses out as a monthly rental way. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am looking for a house that I can only pay some deposit without a monthly rental fee, but because of a low interest rate, many landlords tend to rent their houses out in monthly basis. Your opinion is right. >> CORRECT! I should not have decided to leave my current place. >> CORRECT! You may think that I can cancel my decision and extend my contract.>> CORRECT! Unfortunately, my house was already rented to another new tenant. >> CORRECT! >> BETTER: Unfortunately, my house was already rented by a new tenant. >> OR: Unfortunately, my house was already rented by another new tenant. I felt nervous when I heard that this news.>> I felt nervous when I heard about this news. >> OR: I felt nervous when I heard this news. >> OR: I felt nervous when I heard that this news is true. 1. If you use WHEN I HEARD THAT, you should have a complete sentence following it. I have to move out until 19-October, so I am available to look for a new house only for one month. >> I have to move out until October 19, so I am available to look for a new house only for one month. >> OR: I have to move out until 19th of October, so I only have one month to look for a new house . 2. The way you wrote thye date in your sentence is wrong. Suddenly, my mind went blank. Hahaha! >> CORRECT! What I think, I become. >> CORRECT! It is time for me to keep this famous saying. ^^>> CORRECT! That is all for today and see you very soon!>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!