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Dear my Student [이름],

Good evening and happy Tuesday! ^.^

Thank you for the appreciation! ^^

I also appreciate you for having a mobile class with me.

It was a good time, and I enjoyed talking with you on the phone.

Your voice was also a little bit different.

It was sweeter. Hahaha! ^^,

By the way, when I open my Teacher\'s page, I didn\'t see you name on my schedule today.

I thought we wouldn\'t have any classes anymore, but I was wrong.

I opened your yesterday page, checked your class calendar, and found out that you made a long hold.

Why did you do that?

I hope you had the long hold because of an enjoyable thing.

Anyway, I will wait for you! ^^

Happy reading! ^^,

See you! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: Thanks for answering my question about windows facing the south! ^.^

Dear my Teacher Paula,
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Good morning!
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First of all, I appreciated you calling me by a phone yesterday.
>> First of all, I appreciated you calling me by phone yesterday.

>> OR: First of all, I appreciate you calling me over the phone yesterday.

1. PATTERN: by + something >>> way to do something

Because of a connection problem of SKYPE, I thought I could not hear your voice.

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>> OR: Because of a connection problem of Skype, I thought I couldn\'t hear your voice.

I think it was not an internet connection problem, but it was SKYPE\'s own problem.
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The reason why I say that is because when I was in the office, there was a problem with SKYPE, so I could not contact with my Chinese coworkers. 

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>> OR: The reason why I said that is because when I was in the office, there was a problem with Skype, so I couldn\'t contact my Chinese co-workers.

I hope there is no problem with SKYPE today.
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By the way, your voice sounded different with your voice by a headphone.
>> By the way, your voice sounded different when I used my headphone.

2. Avoid redundancy.

Your voice by a phone sounded more feminine. ^^
>> Your voice on the phone sounded more feminine.

3. It is better to use ON THE PHONE than BY A PHONE.

However, because of my mobile phone\'s low quality, your voice was not clear.
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It is time for me to change it to new one. ^^;;
>> It is time for me to change it to a new one.

4. There should be A before NEW ONE.

By the way, yesterday, I tried to pay for my tuition fee to extend our class for 4 months, but because of exceeding my card limit, so it failed.
>> By the way, yesterday, I tried to pay for my tuition fee to extend our class for 4 months, but because of exceeding my card limit, I failed.

>> OR: By the way, yesterday, I tried to pay for my tuition fee to extend our class for 4 months, but my card limit exceeded, so I failed.

5. BECAUSE and SO can\'t be in one sentence if they are the cause and effect in an idea.

My card amount will be back to normal on September 29 after my card payment slips out of my account.
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However, today is our last class, so if I don\'t extend our class today, I might lose our current time, so I need to discuss with a manager in Power English.
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>> OR: However, today is our last class, so if I don\'t extend our class today, I might lose our current time, so I need to discuss it with a Power English manager.

>> OR: However, today is our last class, so if I don\'t extend our class today, I might lose our current time, so I need to discuss it with one of the managers of Power English.

>> OR: However, today is our last class, so if I don\'t extend our class today, I might lose our current time, so I need to discuss it with one of your managers.

I will let you know the result soon. ^^
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See you very soon!
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[이름]
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P.S.: If a window faces south, a house can get a lot of sunshine.
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In addition, here in Korea, when it is summer, we experience a southeast wind, so it makes us feel cool.
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>> OR: In addition, here in Korea, when it is summer, we experience a southeast wind, so it helps us feel cool.

In contrast, when it is winter, we experience a northwest wind.
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In that case, a north wall of house will block the cold wind, so it makes us not to feel cold.
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>> BETTER: In that case, a north wall of house will block the cold wind, so it doesn\'t make us feel cold.

I hope this explanation will help you to understand the reason why we prefer a house of a southern exposure. ^^

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>> OR: I hope this explanation will help you understand the reason why we prefer a house of a southern exposure.