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Dear my Teacher Paula, Good day! How are you? Maybe, you are wondering why I had the long hold. I already told you before, my credit card limit exceeded, so I failed to pay for my tuition fee last Tuesday. I am going to pay for it when my credit card limit is back to normal, and it will be on September 30. We can see each other next Wednesday. ^^ I am worried about if another new student already occupied my time. I just hope this situation will not happen to me. By the way, what are you going to do for 4 days holiday? In my case, I have a sore throat, so I need to go to see a doctor. Maybe, I got too much stressed to look for a new house, and it seemed to cause me to sicken. It is a normal situation for me. There are a lot of things to consider moving to a new house, so I still have to pay my attention to this matter. I need to decide what removal company I should use. Now, I am comparing some quotations from removal companies. In order not to be overcharged, I have to weight up meticulously. Apart from that, I have to decide what goods I need to throw away. All furniture and home appliances in my house are out of date or broken. If I throw them away, I have to buy new ones, but it is a little hard to afford them for now. Throwing them away is also a problem. It will also cost me some money. Well, I have to budget for them carefully. Anyway, have a nice holiday and see you next Wednesday! ^^ [이름]

Dear my Student [이름],   A terrific Thursday to you! ^.^   I am great, but I am a little sick. My right eye is sore. This condition started last Sunday evening, but I am totally okay. ^^   By the way, thank you for the explanation that you mentioned about why you put our class on long hold! ^^, Hahaha! ^^. I can feel that things are getting better. You are just waiting for the day when you will move to your new home. ^^ Well, budgeting and discarding things are big issues, but I know you can handle everything well.   Anyway, I think I will just take some rest during Korean Thanksgiving Day. I need to give my eyes some rest, especially the right one.   That\'s all for now! ^^ Happy reading! ^^, Have a great holiday! ^^. See you on Wednesday! ^.^   ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~     Dear my Teacher Paula, >> CORRECT! Good day! >> CORRECT! How are you? >> CORRECT! Maybe, you are wondering why I had the long hold. >> CORRECT! I already told you before, my credit card limit exceeded, so I failed to pay for my tuition fee last Tuesday. >> CORRECT! I am going to pay for it when my credit card limit is back to normal, and it will be on September 30. >> CORRECT! We can see each other next Wednesday. ^^ >> CORRECT! I am worried about if another new student already occupied my time. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I am worried about my time being occupied by another new student. I just hope this situation will not happen to me. >> CORRECT! By the way, what are you going to do for 4 days holiday? >> CORRECT! >> OR: By the way, what are you going to do during Thanksgiving Day or \"Chuseok\"? In my case, I have a sore throat, so I need to go to see a doctor. >> CORRECT! Maybe, I got too much stressed to look for a new house, and it seemed to cause me to sicken. >> CORRECT! It is a normal situation for me. >> CORRECT! There are a lot of things to consider moving to a new house, so I still have to pay my attention to this matter. >> There are a lot of things to consider before and when mo,ving to a new house, so I still have to pay attention to this matter. 1. PATTERNS: things to consider when moving ... and things to consider before moving ... I need to decide what removal company I should use.>> CORRECT! >> OR: I need to decide what moving company I should ask service for. Now, I am comparing some quotations from removal companies. >> CORRECT! In order not to be overcharged, I have to weight up meticulously. >> In order not to be overcharged, I have to weigh up things meticulously.  2. WEIGHT UP should be WEIGH UP. T should be removed. 3. PATTERN: weigh up something or weigh something up Apart from that, I have to decide what goods I need to throw away. >> CORRECT! All furniture and home appliances in my house are out of date or broken. >> CORRECT! If I throw them away, I have to buy new ones, but it is a little hard to afford them for now. >> CORRECT! Throwing them away is also a problem. >> CORRECT! It will also cost me some money. >> CORRECT! Well, I have to budget for them carefully. >> CORRECT! >> OR: Well, I have to make a budget for them carefully. Anyway, have a nice holiday and see you next Wednesday! ^^>> CORRECT! [이름] >> CORRECT!