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2011-04-29 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Dear [Name]. [Name], Good morning! I found that you already requested PO# about Withholding Tax Analysis by eRO. So would you please reject that I requested PO# about Withholding Tax Analysis yesterday? Thank you for your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear Bella!

I really appreciate that you can make a letter like this.

Keep up the good work!

T.Cam

Dear [Name]. [Name],
>>correct
Good morning!
>>correct
I found that you already requested PO# about Withholding Tax Analysis by eRO.
>>I found that you've already requested the PO # of the withholding tax analysis for ERO.
So would you please reject that I requested PO# about Withholding Tax Analysis yesterday?
>>So, would you please reject the PO# for the withholding tax analysis that I requested yesterday?
Thank you for your help.

>>correct

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