Composition

Hello, Erine! I am going to have a day off tomorrow, so I will take my class at home. I don't have any special plans, but I am happy that I can oversleep. Maybe, I will go out with my boyfriend. It means that he is also going to have a day off. Here in Korea, it is fall season, but I have not enjoyed a sense of fall due to my move. Now, my personal priority has already finished, so I would be able to enjoy my free time. I will let you know what I did. By the way, may I ask you something about your corrections? My English skill is not that good for now, so when you help me correct my composition, could you explain the reasons why the sentences are wrong? If you don't mind doing so, I'd be happy. ^^ That is all for today and see you tomorrow!

Hello there, [이름]! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about your day-off and your plans!^^ I have checked the sentences and also gave you the reasons why I put the corrections there. One of the sentences is an alternative sentence to what you wrote. I hope my explanations would be very clear for you all the time. See you! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hello, Erine! >> CorrectI am going to have a day off tomorrow, so I will take my class at home. >> Correct or>> I am taking a day off tomorrow, so I am going to have my class at home. (**The first statement emphasizes an arranged or fixed plan and the second statement is your intention to do it however, it may not have any arrangements yet.)I don\'t have any special plans, but I am happy that I can oversleep. >> CorrectMaybe, I will go out with my boyfriend. >> CorrectIt means that he is also going to have a day off. >> CorrectHere in Korea, it is fall season, but I have not enjoyed a sense of fall due to my move. >> Here in Korea, it is the fall season but I have not enjoyed a sense of fall due to my movement. (**We should have the article \"the\" when we use the word \"season. Another one is move is a verb and in your sentence, we need to use a noun since it is following the pronoun \"my\") Now, my personal priority has already finished, so I would be able to enjoy my free time. >> Now, my personal priority has already finished, I would be able to enjoy my free time.I will let you know what I did. >> CorrectBy the way, may I ask you something about your corrections? >>CorrectMy English skill is not that good for now, so when you help me correct my composition, could you explain the reasons why the sentences are wrong? >> Correct If you don\'t mind doing so, I\'d be happy. ^^ >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> Correct