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Dear [Name], A happy Thursday to you! Indeed, time flies so fast. We can enjoy our weekend if we just endure for 2 days. According to the weather forecast, here in Seoul, it will rain on this coming weekend. I don't like the weather on weekend is cloudy or rainy. However, these days, we have a lack of precipitation so it is okay for me to have a rainy day. Well, I would have to stay at home on this weekend. ^^ See you tomorrow! *Essay Question: Should the United States invest more time, money, and effort in space exploration? Why or why not? Someone says that human beings will be able to visit the space in a short period of time. I can't deny that human beings' science technology level has already reached the stage where we can go there. However, I want to ask them 'what for'? Now, because of human beings' discriminated development, our earth is being destroyed. If we are given a chance to conquer the space and go there anytime, we might encounter the same situation with our current situation in the Earth. From an environmental standpoint, the United States had better not concentrate their efforts in space exploration but focus on keeping and saving the environment in the Earth. In conclusion, the space is great and not a minor existence which we can control with our arrogance.

Hello there, [이름]!^^ Thank you for answering your homework. I can say that this one brings up an arguement and I can show this one to NASA so they can have reflection regarding our environment. kkk Kidding. Thank you for a wonderful essay. ~~Teacher Erine~~ Dear [Name], >> Correct A happy Thursday to you! >> CorrectIndeed, time flies so fast. >> CorrectWe can enjoy our weekend if we just endure for 2 days. >> CorrectAccording to the weather forecast, here in Seoul, it will rain on this coming weekend. >> According to the weather forecast, here in Seoul, it will rain this coming weekend. (We don\'t use a preposition when we use \"this\" as a determiner)I don\'t like the weather on weekend is cloudy or rainy. >> I don\'t like the weather on weekend if it\'s cloudy or rainy.However, these days, we have a lack of precipitation so it is okay for me to have a rainy day. >> CorrectWell, I would have to stay at home on this weekend. ^^ >> Well I would have to stay at home this weekend. (Same explanation as above)See you tomorrow! >> Correct*Essay Question: Should the United States invest more time, money, and effort in space exploration? Why or why not?Someone says that human beings will be able to visit the space in a short period of time. >>CorrectI can\'t deny that human beings\' science technology level has already reached the stage where we can go there. >>CorrectHowever, I want to ask them \'what for\'? >>CorrectNow, because of human beings\' discriminated development, our earth is being destroyed. >>CorrectIf we are given a chance to conquer the space and go there anytime, we might encounter the same situation with our current situation in the Earth. >> If we are given a chance to conquer the space and go there anytime, we might encounter the same situation with our current situation on Earth. (Preposition: on Earth.)From an environmental standpoint, the United States had better not concentrate their efforts in space exploration but focus on keeping and saving the environment in the Earth. >> From an environmental standpoint, the United States had better not concentrate their efforts in space exploration but focus on keeping and saving the environment on Earth.In conclusion, the space is great and not a minor existence which we can control with our arrogance. >> Correct