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Hi, Erine! A happy Friday to you! Actually, I am a little bit sleepy now because I went to sleep late yesterday. The reason why I slept late is because I had to visit one of my customers with my Chinese coworkers, and then I needed to accompany them on their trip in Seoul after finishing a dinner. It was almost 11 O'clock when I went back home and I could go to bed at 12 O'clock. For me, it was an unusually situation so it made me feel tired and sleepy. However, that is okay! It is wonderful Friday and I can have a rest to the fullest tomorrow. I have to catch up on sleeping tomorrow just like you. I wish you will have a fantastic and exciting weekend with your family and friends. See you! ^^ *Essay Some people believe that students aren't learning enough in high school. Should school standards be higher? Explain your answer using specific reasons and examples. In my opinion, this question is not related with our Korean's situation. Here in Korea, students are learning more than enough knowledge in high school and it makes them get a lot of stress and have burdens. They are being requested to study very hard to get into a good university but I don't think it is necessary for them to study so hard on that age. I think our high schools lack leisure activities which can let students enjoy more experiences. Our schools just force them to study and study and only focus on the result of how many students get into a famous university. Is it a right way for our students? I don't think so! Well, I think we totally need to reform our education system in order to let them make a wonderful memories in various fields in their school days.

It\'s an energetic Friday, [이름]! Remember, we may not have enough rest time, but I believe that we can surpass this day and all our tasks properly and happilly^^ I hope that you can rest enough this weekend. I\'ll see you again on Monday then!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Hi, Erine! >> Correct A happy Friday to you! >> Correct Actually, I am a little bit sleepy now because I went to sleep late yesterday. >> Correct The reason why I slept late is because I had to visit one of my customers with my Chinese coworkers, and then I needed to accompany them on their trip in Seoul after finishing a dinner. >> The reason why I slept late is because I had to visit one of my customers with my Chinese coworkers, and then I needed to accompany them on their trip in Seoul after finishing dinner. (No article before dinner)It was almost 11 O\'clock when I went back home and I could go to bed at 12 O\'clock. >> CorrectFor me, it was an unusually situation so it made me feel tired and sleepy. >> For me, it was an unusual situation so it made me feel tired and sleepy. (Only use unusual before a noun)However, that is okay! >> CorrectIt is wonderful Friday and I can have a rest to the fullest tomorrow. >> It is a wonderful Friday and I can have rest to the fullest tomorrow. (I like this expression!)I have to catch up on sleeping tomorrow just like you. >> CorrectI wish you will have a fantastic and exciting weekend with your family and friends. >>CorrectSee you! ^^*Essay Some people believe that students aren\'t learning enough in high school. Should school standards be higher? Explain your answer using specific reasons and examples.In my opinion, this question is not related with our Korean\'s situation. >> In my opinion, this question is not related to the Korean\'s situation. (We don\'t usually use \"our\" discussing a nation\'s situation)Here in Korea, students are learning more than enough knowledge in high school and it makes them get a lot of stress and have burdens. >> CorrectThey are being requested to study very hard to get into a good university but I don\'t think it is necessary for them to study so hard on that age. >> They are being requested to study very hard to get into a good university but I don\'t think it is necessary for them to study so hard at that age.  (Preposition usage)I think our high schools lack leisure activities which can let students enjoy more experiences. >> CorrectOur schools just force them to study and study and only focus on the result of how many students get into a famous university. >> CorrectIs it a right way for our students? >> CorrectI don\'t think so! >>CorrectWell, I think we totally need to reform our education system in order to let them make a wonderful memories in various fields in their school days. >> Well, I think we totally need to reform our education system in order to let them make wonderful memories in various fields in their school days. (article)