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Good morning, Erine! Did you take a rest well last weekend? In my case, it rained for two days last weekend so I stayed at home having movie marathon. One was related with alien and the other was about mountaineering. The alien movie was so so but the mountaineering was exciting and touching. The title of that movie is K2 and it was based on a real story. Through the second movie, I could realize nature's greatness again. You won't also be disappointed with that if you see it. That is all for today and see you tomorrow! *Essay In some parts, I agree with these statements. For example, here in Korea, there are many people who undergo thyroid cancer operation and the ratio is high compared to other countries. The reason why this situation spreads is because people do medical examination excessively and almost doctors recommend an operation to them even if it is not a severe condition. Some advanced countries are considering the thyroid cancer as a slow cancer so they don't usually operate on a patient with that symptom. However, here in Korea, as soon as it is found out, doctors tend to advise their patients to get an operation. As I heard, there are big possibilities for us to encounter side effects after getting an operation but doctors still push patients to undergo it due to their own interests. Well, "Ignorance is bliss," and "What you don't know won't hurt you" seem really suitable for this situation.

Hello, [이름]!^^ Thanks for asking about my weekend. I was able to rest last Saturday but had problems sleeping last Sunday. Anyhow, I will live like a zombie today. kkk Take care and enjoy your Monday!^^ ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Erine! >> CorrectDid you take a rest well last weekend? >> CorrectIn my case, it rained for two days last weekend so I stayed at home having movie marathon. >> CorrectOne was related with alien and the other was about mountaineering. >> CorrectThe alien movie was so so but the mountaineering was exciting and touching. >> CorrectThe title of that movie is K2 and it was based on a real story. >> CorrectThrough the second movie, I could realize nature\'s greatness again. >> Because of the second movie, I could realize nature\'s greatness again. (It is more on the cause and effect so we use Because)You won\'t also be disappointed with that if you see it. >> CorrectThat is all for today and see you tomorrow! >> Correct*EssayIn some parts, I agree with these statements. >>CorrectFor example, here in Korea, there are many people who undergo thyroid cancer operation and the ratio is high compared to other countries. >> CorrectThe reason why this situation spreads is because people do medical examination excessively and almost doctors recommend an operation to them even if it is not a severe condition. >> The reaason why this situation spreads is because people undergo their medical examination excessively and most doctors recommend them to have an operation even it is not a severe condition. (We say undergo instead of do and most + nouns.)Some advanced countries are considering the thyroid cancer as a slow cancer so they don\'t usually operate on a patient with that symptom. >> Some advanced countries are considering thyroid cancer as a slow moving type of cancer so they don\'t usually operate a patient with that symptom.However, here in Korea, as soon as it is found out, doctors tend to advise their patients to get an operation. >> CorrectAs I heard, there are big possibilities for us to encounter side effects after getting an operation but doctors still push patients to undergo it due to their own interests. >> CorrectWell, \"Ignorance is bliss,\" and \"What you don\'t know won\'t hurt you\" seem really suitable for this situation. >> Correct >>