Composition

Good morning, Erine! I am sorry to hear that you had a cold. I hope you can recover from the cold soon! ^^ Anyway, I have one question regarding an expression. Can I use 'hot temper' as a noun? I just wanted to use that word as a noun in today's class but you helped me to correct it to 'is hot tempered'. I thought 'hot temper' is a noun so far. ^^;; Please help me make it clear. That is all for now and take care! *Essay In my case, I prefer to live in a quiet country when I am old. Now, I live in Seoul where is the most crowded place in Korea so sometimes, I hate this complexity. Every day, I face many people in the public transportation and cars on the road. Because of them, I always feel tired on my way to work. Sometimes, I don't want to hear any noise and bump into anyone. I think city lacks a sense of warmth between people. Even me, I don't know who lives next door. It proves that living in the city is so lonely and tough. When I imagine that I live in the fishing village, just the thought makes me happy. Every day, I can go fishing and walk around the coast with my lover. That is a life that I dream.

Hi, [이름]!^^ Here you are with your composition for today. Thank you for explaining things, asking questions and clarifying things. I hope that I was able to explain the rules well in this homework. See you again tomorrow! ~~Teacher Erine~~ Good morning, Erine! >> CorrectI am sorry to hear that you had a cold. >> I am sorry to hear that you have a cold/you have got a cold/caught a cold. (Collocations)I hope you can recover from the cold soon! ^^ >> CorrectAnyway, I have one question regarding an expression. >> CorrectCan I use \'hot temper\' as a noun? >> Correct (As far as I am concerned, hot tempered is considered as an adjective)I just wanted to use that word as a noun in today\'s class but you helped me to correct it to \'is hot tempered\'. >> CorrectI thought \'hot temper\' is a noun so far. ^^;; >> Correct (Change the idea already!^^)Please help me make it clear. >> Correct That is all for now and take care! >> Correct*EssayIn my case, I prefer to live in a quiet country when I am old. >> CorrectNow, I live in Seoul where is the most crowded place in Korea so sometimes, I hate this complexity. >> Now, I live in Seoul, which is the most crowded place in Korea, so sometimes I hate this complexity. (The word after when and where in adjective clauses cannot be a verb. Just use which.) Every day, I face many people in the public transportation and cars on the road. >> CorrectBecause of them, I always feel tired on my way to work. >> CorrectSometimes, I don\'t want to hear any noise and bump into anyone. >> CorrectI think city lacks a sense of warmth between people. >> I think a city lacks the sense of warmth among people. (articles and prepositions used for plural nouns)Even me, I don\'t know who lives next door. >> I don\'t even know who lives next door to mine. (The use of even needs to be practiced. It is in the middle of two verbs.)It proves that living in the city is so lonely and tough. >> CorrectWhen I imagine that I live in the fishing village, just the thought makes me happy. >> CorrectEvery day, I can go fishing and walk around the coast with my lover. >> Correct or>> I can go fishing and walk around the coast with the one I love/with my loved one.That is a life that I dream. >> That is the life I dream. (You are already informing me so you might as well use \"the\" to make it more specific)